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Monday, April 8, 2024

Something New

We feature each fortnight Nicholas Reid's reviews and comments on new and recent books. 

“BIRD CHILD & OTHER STORIES” by Patricia Grace (Penguin, $NZ37); “THE GREAT DIVIDE” by Cristina Henriquez (4th Estate – Harper Collins, $NZ36.99); “MY HEAVENLY FAVOURITE” by Lucas Rijneveld – translated from the Dutch by Michele Hutchison (Faber & Faber, $NZ37)

Now 87 years old, and with many short stories and novels to her credit, Patricia Grace is very skilled in different genres. Re-workings of ancient mythology,  childhood memories, satirical anecdotes and hard realism – all can be found in her latest collection Bird Child & Other Stories. An introduction tells us that Bird Child & Other Stories is divided into three parts. Part One – reworkings of ancient Maori myths and legends. Part Two – stories about Mereana, a young girl and her life in wartime Wellington. Part Three – her most recent stories dealing with problems of the current era. Seeing as these are three quite different forms of narration, the only way one can read this book is to take each of the Three Parts as three quite different books.

Part One: Patricia Grace begins with the title story of the book “Bird Child”, a variation on ancient myth. It is set in some primeval time when gods are not fully formed and birds are wise, cunning and articulate. A child is born but the spirit is taken out of the child’s body and the spirit becomes part of the bird clan. The child’s bird mother is Kaa, presumably a kea. The bird child is both respected and feared by other birds, but he brings warmth into the world. In a way, Grace’s reworking of ancient beliefs is dominated by the richness of forests before human beings came along. There is a respect for a very verdant nature, so that “Bird Child” becomes an epic of forest. The three stories that follow are shorter, and one reviewer (Paula Morris) has already suggested that these stories are aimed primarily at school-children, enlightening them about Maori lore. I agree with this suggestion. The story “Mahuika et al.” is set in the world of gods, goddesses and spirits. The great mother Mahuika directs how things will benefit human beings when they finally wake up. Fire flashes from her fingertips and gives fire to the people… but Maui the trickster tricks Mahuika and steals the making of fire. “Sun’s Marbles” is the epic story of the gods who, tired of being embraced too tightly between Earth and Sky, are led by Maui to push Earth and Sky apart, to the advantage of the gods. “The Unremembered” takes the traditional story of Rona who cursed the Moon and was forced to be part of the Moon, but who eventually did much to preserve the literal health of the Earth. Grace uses this fable to consider the need for ecological health on Earth. The tone is admonitory, and certainly a tale readable for adolescents.

Part Two is very different in style and attitude. There are twelve anecdotes about Mereana, a young Maori girl living near Wellington in the 1940s when the Second World War is in progress. Given that this was the time and place of Patricia Grace’s childhood, it is hard not to see these stories as at least partly autobiographical. In one story, Mereana experiences wartime night-time black-outs. In another she waves her father goodbye as he goes off to war. She and other kids are excited when G.Is. give then chewing gum. Her uncle jokingly says he’s going to give his children a monkey when he’s back from his sailing... but in the end it proves to be a joke. Mereana learns how to fish in the company of her uncle and her cousins, and after much trying she does land a fish. Being a Catholic kid, she and her school-mates wonder if they’ve committed a mortal sin by blowing out the red candle that is supposed to stay alight always. When she hears that her father is coming home, she frets that she might have forgotten what he looks like; but she does join in the celebrations of her extended family when the soldiers return home… and this shows that the stories run across a number of years. Mereana is growing up. There is one very sober tale called “The Urupa” in which a child is taken to a cemetery  and learns about his whakapapa. There is also one very chastising story when Mereana was still very young – she is sent off to buy a loaf of bread, but she is accosted by two older Pakeha girls, who first throw away her purse and then physically wound her with a piece of broken glass. When her mother confronts the mother of these two girls, their mother curses her, says Mereana is lying and slams the door on her. This is the one story that raises the issue of racial prejudice in New Zealand. The final story in Part Two has Mereana now a grown-up young student attending a hop, and the problem when gate-crashers butt in. The earlier stories show the simplicity and sometimes purity of a child’s mind, but also carefully and persuasively depict the world she inhabits. 

Part Three, as it deals with the present age, tells us of both compassionate things and brutal things. All the major characters are Maori. Dare I say these are the most grown-up stories in the book? On the challenging side, there is “The Machine”, a sad realist tale of a woman working as a machinist while having to look after an invalid mother. The monotony of machine-work and tiring factory protocols drum through the story. “Green Dress” is about an unhappy domestic situation – a daughter is in conflict with her mother, especially when the daughter marries an unreliable man. The mother nags and can be very quarrelsome but in the end, her traditional scale of values proves to be more resiliant than the daughter’s ideas. “Hey Dude” (deliberately referring to the Beatles’ song “Hey Jude”) is a very short tale plunging into the very discursive thoughts of an elderly woman. One of the most positive and ultimately optimistic stories is “Matariki All-Stars”. A widower has seven daughters – just like the seven daughters of Matariki. He is a hard-working man, but he doesn’t quite earn enough to look after all his girls. Still he doesn’t want to have his family broken up. He often finds himself at odds with his [childless] sister, who is bossy and thinks it is for the best for her to take some of the girls into her care. But the father battles through and ultimately raises all his daughters well. They are his shining Matariki stars. Is this sentimental? No – because among other things Patricia Grace shows how hard single-parenthood is and how it takes a special sort of heroism to raise children well. Speaking of single parents, “Thunder” has a young boy having to look after his even younger siblings and then finding a lost kid who has wandered away from his home. Again the issue is how very difficult single-parenthood is, and how prejudice is often directed at single mothers. And after all these telling stories, there comes the one story which suggests real anger. This is “Seeing Red”. A Maori civil servant in a government department becomes more and more angry at the way his Pakeha colleagues either misunderstand or regard as unnecessary certain Maori norms. This is about the matter of education and how Maori teenagers should be taught – and one thing the author correctly hits on is the way many schools simply “tick boxes” by going through the motions of dealing with Maori concerns without really setting up appropriate programmes. This is where Patricia Grace is an activist.

From all the above you can see that Grace has produced a very varied collection of stories, using many different types of narration but all, in their very different styles, enlightening us about different phases Maori culture and mores.

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Cristina Henriquez’s The Great Divide covers a lot of issues and a lot of characters. Set mainly in the year 1906, it gathers together a cast of people who are somehow connected with the construction of the Panama Canal, when the U.S.A. has expropriated from the state of Panama a “canal zone” six miles wide, which is in effect ruled by the U.S.A..

To give you the general flavour of the novel, the best this I can do is to list some of the major characters. The old Panamainian Francisco Aguina is a fisherman who wants to stick with the traditional ways. But his son Omar never wanted to be a fisherman and he runs away to make money joining with labourers digging the Panama Canal. So there is a father’s loss of his son. The resourceful young woman Ida Bunting, of mixed race, runs away from her home in Barbados because she wants to raise money to pay a doctor who will cure her beloved sister Millicent’s damaged lungs. And in her story there is her formidable mother Lucille Bunting who has to deal with the plantation owner who impregnated her. So there is a mother missing her daughter and many domestic problems. In the “canal zone” there is the family of the American doctor John Oswald, who is trying to find a way of curing malaria now the Yellow Fever has abated. Ida Bunting, by good fortune, becomes the nurse for John Oswald’s wife. The Panamainian husband-and-wife team Joaquin and Valentina bring together a troop protesting against the Yanquis’ plan to destroy their village to made way for a dam as part of the great canal. And there is the sadistic foreman Miller who drives his labourers so harshly that there is a violent outcome for one character. For good measure, I must note that Cristina Henriquez drops in two fantastic characters who come close to the “magical realism” that once flourished in Central and South American literature. One is the soothsayer Dona Ruiz, who is presented almost as a witch. The other is the fisherman Francisco Aguina’s deceased wife Esme, who comes back to him in dreams and in apparitions.

There are many other characters I could mention, but this probably gives you the general idea. The Great Divide is a kind of saga, with many characters, many different problems, and always some new event happening. A page-turner certainly. For me, the tempo is somewhat stop-start. Whenever a new character is introduced, we have at length his or her back-story. This should not worry most readers, however.

The Great Divide is a novel intended for mass readership and so it has a happy ending for at least some of the most tried and mistreated characters. That’s as it should be, I suppose. But though Cristina Henriquez touches on the making of the canal, she does not really dig deeply into it. Another author might have focused even more on the harsh and dangerous conditions in which the labourers had to toil, the poor wages they were given, the authoritarian way the Americans overlorded them, the segregation of races that was practiced, the quelling of any discontent from the indigenous Panamanians  – in short, all the practices used by a new colonial power. In these matters it might be worth your while to look up on this blog my review of Joseph Conrad’s Nostromo , in which I mention the Colombian novelist Juan Gabriel Vasquez’s The Secret History of Costaguana, which really concerns the way the U.S.A. took over the “canal zone”.  In fairness Henriquez does make some reference to all these things and there are some brutal episodes. But The Great Divide is more focused on the adventures of her main characters and how they fare.

Clearly written and showing real research, I see no reason why this shouldn’t be a very popular novel for a large readership.

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            How very different is Lucas Rijneveld’s My Heavenly Favourite .

In Death in Venice, Aschenbach ogles a young boy but never lays a finger on him. In Lolita, Humbert Humbert drools over a pre-pubescent girl but barely gets to possess her. But when the Dutch novelist Lucas Rijneveld writes about a paedophile, he gives us all the explicit details of a 14-year-old girl being sexually groomed and exploited by a middle-aged man.

This is Rijneveld’s second novel. His first, The Discomfort of Evening, earned acclaim and won the International Booker Prize. It concerned in part a 12-year-old girl being introduced to sex games. Rijneveld identifies as non-binary, but he was born and raised a girl and was then subject to much teasing. The ultimate vulnerability of young girls concerns him, as does the abuse that can plague them. [NB Rijneveld by choice prefers to be called “he” when he is spoken about in the English language.]

Kurt is a veterinarian working in a rural farming area (the country Rijneveld comes from) with a wife and teenage sons. He is occasionally shocked, such as finding the corpse of a farmer who hanged himself when his herd of cattle was fatally diseased. But otherwise Kurt is generally happy doing his rounds, offering advice to farmers or thrusting his gloved hands up cows having difficulty giving birth.

Then he meets a farmer’s 14-year-old daughter. He is bewitched by her. He is fascinated by her odd talk about Hitler and Freud and the destruction of the Twin Towers. He plays along with her favoured pop music, everything from the Cranberries to Bowie, Kurt Cobain and multiple others. He takes her to movies. He buys her sweets. He calls her “my heavenly favourite”. He dreams about her and masturbates with her in mind. And bit by bit he fondles her a little, then a lot, then in an extreme way. This is where the explicit sex scenes come in, finally amounting to rape although Kurt doesn’t see it that way. He likes to see himself as avuncular.

There are some side issues. At one point, Kurt’s son is attracted to the girl – unaware of his father’s behaviour – so Kurt had to find ways of warning him off. Kurt has nightmares about his mother, suggesting that he has been warped by incest in his family. The Calvinist Reform Church seems to have done him no good when he was young.

But the skill of the novel is not in the situation. It is in the narration. My Heavenly Favourite is told throughout in the first-person by Kurt, who is addressing the girl in a sort of on-going confession. He speaks in sentences that scamper through page after page without a full-stop in sight. This is the narration of a man’s fevered mind. His brain is crowded with desire, fear, guilt, lust, grandiose schemes, a sense of victimhood, and of course some self-vindication. Most unnerving is the way he introduces animal penises to the girl before he introduces his own penis to her. His animal imagery has the tendency to equate the girl with just another animal. Yet in all this, he is aware of clear warnings that he will ultimately face trial and retribution. Which he does.

It is hard to categorise this novel. It could be read as the analysis of an unbalanced mind, even if the protagonist has sharp observation of the world he inhabits and is apparently quite sane. It could be an exercise in being – to use what is now a cliché – “transgressive” just for the hell of it. It could simply be condemning paedophiles. But here is the greatest problem. The prose often rises to brilliance with unexpected turns of phrase, startling metaphors and shrewdness. But you always have to ask yourself – what purpose is this virtuosity serving?

Something Old

 Not everything worth reading is hot off the press. In this section, we recommend "something old" that is still well worth reading. "Something Old" can mean anything from a venerable and antique classic to a good book first published four or more years ago.

ALL YOU NEED TO KNOW ABOUT THE NOVELS AND STORIES OF F. SCOTT FITZGERALD – PART TWO, F. Scott Fitzgerald, The Beautiful and Damned

                                   F.Scott Fitzgerald - The young established author in 1921
 

Continuing my survey of the novels and short-stories of F. Scott Fitzgerald.

Fitzgerald’s second novel The Beautiful and Damned is not as idealistic, muddled and romantic as This Side of Paradise and is in many ways a more mature book. It also has a robust and almost straightforward narrative, unlike the fragmented  This Side of Paradise. There is a greater awareness that youth has its limits, in spite of there still being a yearning for careless (or carefree) youth and the dread of growing old. Taking advice once again from Edmund Wilson and his editor Maxwell Perkins, Fitzgerald worked hard at revising and re-revising The Beautiful and Damned, trying to purge himself of the lush, romantic prose he had often deployed in This Side of Paradise. In this, he was not entirely successful. The Beautiful and Damned was first presented to the world in serial form in the (now long-since defunct) Metropolitan Magazine between late 1921 and early 1922, and only then published in book form in mid-1922. Once again, Fitzgerald divided his novel into “Books”, with each “Book” divided into chapters. It’s also worth noting that most of the novel takes place before the 1920s. We follow the life of the protagonist Anthony Patch from the age of 25 [when he has finished studying at Harvard] to the age of 33 – that is, from the years 1913 to 1921.

The title The Beautiful and Damned at first seemed to me to be a cheaply sensationalist title – the type of thing that would be attached to a B movie. But as I read my way through this longish novel (about 400 pages) I gradually understood its meaning. The “beautiful” are those who think they can float through life supping on aesthetic experience, enjoying the moment and imagining that life will always be easy, especially if somebody else is footing their bill. They rejoice in their youth. But they are “damned” because youth is ephemeral – it passes, adult responsibility falls on them, and they are no longer youngsters, no longer the brightest and wittiest… and yet there is still that unfulfillable yearning for flaming youth.

The first cover illustration of the novel once again used Zelda and F. Scott Fitzgerald as models... sort of...
 

Here is my simplified synopsis:

Book One is almost completely set in New York. Fresh from college [Harvard] and renting a very luxurious apartment, Anthony Patch lives off the money regularly sent to him by his multi-millionaire grandfather Adam J. Patch. Old Adam is intensely Protestant, a moral reformer, a promoter of Prohibition who expects and assumes his grandson Anthony is living the same sort clean moral life he himself endorses. Anthony is also aware that he will inherit a fortune when his grandfather dies. But Anthony is a hedonist, a party-goer and a wastrel. Seeing himself as an aesthete, he believes he has a superior appreciation of the arts and he will one day prove himself, probably in the arts… but not yet. He has his moments of doubt, but still talks big with college friends such as Maury Noble, who sees himself as a sort of philosopher; and Richard Caramel, who is set on writing a novel. More alluring of course are women and Anthony tries to find one. First there is Josephine, but she becomes a pal rather than someone to love. Then the beautiful Gloria Gilbert comes into his life. She is young, fashionable, often unsuccessfully wooed by other men, insouciant, careless, self-absorbed, often silly, emotional - in short a flapper of the age. Gloria is fully aware that men are attracted to her. Anthony Patch’s courtship of her is, credibly and painfully, drawn out. He is envious of the other beaux who follow after her. He is aware of her apparent impassiveness and her loud annoyance at anything that will disturb her hedonistic ways. Yet gradually they are drawn together.

Book Two. And so Anthony consults his sceptical grandfather, Adam J. Patch, who tells him that he should by now be thinking of work – getting a profession and earning his way in the world. Adam nevertheless endorses Anthony’s getting married and still funds him.  Anthony marries Gloria. They are in conjugal ecstasy… for a while. With the money they have at their disposal they idle about and travel. They think of going to Europe, but by now the World War is in progress [though the United States are not yet involved]. Instead they dawdle off to California and the West Coast and they swim and tan and idle… and they get bored… and they dawdle back to New York and they begin to quarrel. Should they have a baby? Gloria isn’t up for it. Gloria wants to go down South and visit her family but Anthony doesn’t like the food they serve down South and isn’t sure he likes her family. And, between moments of carnal passion, they have their first really violent quarrel. They think they can enjoy life more if they live somewhere out of the city, so they buy a grey house in a rural area north of New York. In matters of importance, Anthony and Gloria are chronically lazy. When Anthony is offered a job in finance, he lasts for one week. When Anthony is dissatisfied with his Japanese servant Tana, he is too lazy to fire him. There is much tension when other men make passes at Gloria, for her beauty is legend, and in one very vivid section Gloria runs away after she has been frightened and humiliated by one such pass. We would now call it sexual harassment. For all her faults, and for all her flightiness, she nevertheless remains loyal to Anthony. And they drink and they party and hope for the best and they party and drink and assume their workless lives will go on forever. It is magic. It is romantic. At which point catastrophe hits. While Anthony and Gloria are hosting a wild and boozy party in their rural grey house, grandfather Adam J. Patch unexpectedly drops in, is disgusted with Anthony’s drunken behaviour, and stalks away cancelling the payments that have so far supported Anthony. He also cuts Anthony out of his will. When grandfather dies, Anthony begins the long and expensive legal business of contesting the will.  Meanwhile, he has to earn money for the first time as he and Gloria have to shift into a less salubrious apartment in a more slummy part of New York. He tries writing trash for popular magazines, but he doesn’t have the talent to succeed. But at this stage (in 1917) the United States joins the Allies in fighting the war in Europe and Anthony is drafted into the infantry… after having failed to join the officer corps.

Book Three. The third part of the novel is very different in tone from the first two parts. It is more matter-of-fact, more concerned with material events, than Parts One and Two. There are fewer of the intensely analytical passages charting the different moods of Anthony and Gloria. With the United States now involved in the World War, the army enlists Anthony and he is taken to a camp down South. For a while he acts as a well-behaved soldier and he is promoted to sergeant. There is even a possibility that he might be officer material. But he is more interested in women. He begins flirting with a clearly working-class woman called Dorothy Raycroft who apparently has had many lovers. (She is most often called “Dot”, which rather cruelly suggests how unimportant she was to all the men who loved-her-and-left-her.) Flirtation turns into an affair. [Okay, the novel was published in 1922, so there are no explicit scenes of sexual engagement, but that is clearly meant.] Dot thinks Anthony is her one true love. But Anthony falls foul of the army when he goes A.W.O.L. after a boozy engagement and breaks curfew. He is broken back to the ranks and later, for other misdemeanours, he spends some time in the lock-up. The army moves up to New York, expecting to be transported to the war in Europe. But it is late 1918, the armistice had been signed and the war is over. Anthony is discharged from the army and is at last reunited with Gloria, who has written him few letters and has also had to ward off some wolves. She has taken things hard in their diminished circumstances. They depend on what little money they have by selling bonds. She drinks more. He drinks more. In fact, with Prohibition having become law (in 1919), there is more desperate drinking in society than ever. They are well on the way to being alcoholics, especially as much of the hooch they drink comes from unreliable bootleggers. Fitzgerald inserts some raw satire when Anthony  tries to train as a travelling salesman, attempting to sell booklets on how to get rich. It is pure, nonsensical boosterism, not helped by the inebriated state Anthony is in when he tries to sell his worthless wares. Former Harvard pals shun him. Now 29 years old Gloria, still hoping they can raise more money, still believing she is as beautiful as she was when she was twenty, decides she might make it in the movies [then still silent]. She is given a screen test… but she is told that she is too old for any leading part and might at best gain a small walk-on part. She is devastated. She weeps. Where have her youth and beauty gone? Anthony and Gloria sink lower and lower, drunker and drunker, ravaged by alcohol, more and more degraded. At which point you may think that Fitzgerald has written a perfectly conventional morality story – thoughtless, hedonistic youth destroyed by its own idleness.  But, literally in the last three pages of the novel, Fitzgerald turns the unexpected knife. Grandfather’s will has been overturned. Anthony has inherited millions after all. Is this a happy ending? No. Because, worn out by his boozing debauchery, Anthony can no longer enjoy the things he once enjoyed. He has created nothing and does not have the will to create anything. He has reverted to a sort of permanent childishness, poring over his old stamp collections… 

              Anthony Patch and Gloria Gilbert were clearly based on Scott and Zelda
 

            And of course, dear reader, I have stripped The Beautiful and Damned of much of its texture by giving you a very simplified synopsis, ignoring Fitzgerald’s distinctive style and even ignoring some of the characters who play important roles. Perhaps I will amend things a little by quoting some of the things in the novel that stood out to me. In summing up a character, Fitzgerald paints the picture of a wealthy young man’s ideal, money-dominated life, thus: “Behind Maury Noble’s attractive indolence, his irrelevance and his easy mockery, lay a surprising and relentless maturity of purpose. His intention, as he stated it in college, had been to use three years in travel, three years in utter leisure – and then to become immensely rich as quickly as possible.”  (Book One, Chapter 2)

            Despite his attempts to live the easy life of a wealthy aesthete, even from early in the novel Anthony Patch has the uneasy sense that his life is really pointless, thus: “Back in his apartment the greyness returned. His cocktails had died, making him sleepy, somewhat befogged and inclined to be surly…. Anthony Patch with no record of achievement, without courage, without strength to be satisfied with truth when it was given him. Oh, he was a pretentious fool, making careers out of cocktails and meanwhile regretting, weakly and secretly, the collapse of an insufficient and wretched idealism. He had garnished his soul in the subtlest taste and now he longed for the old rubbish. He was empty, it seemed, empty as an old bottle…” (Book One, Chapter 2)

Though he is deeply in love with Gloria, Anthony is very soon aware of Gloria’s narcissism and hedonism, as when he takes her to a dance: “Would she sit on her right or on her left? Her beautiful eyes and lips were very grave as she made her choice, and Anthony thought again how naïve was her every gesture; she took all things of life for hers to choose from and apportion, as though she were continually picking out presents for herself from an inexhaustible counter.” (Book One, Chapter 2)  Later, Anthony asks her “Aren’t you interested in anything except yourself?” To which she replies curtly “Not much.” (Book One, Chapter 3) When they are about to agree to marry “Peace was restored – the ensuing moments were so much more sweet and sharp and poignant. They were stars on the stage, each playing to an audience of two; the passion of their pretence created the actuality. Here, finally, was the quintessence of self-expression – yet it was probable that for the most part their love expressed Gloria rather than Anthony. He felt often like a scarcely tolerated guest at a party she was giving.  (Book Two, Chapter 1) Later, showing her flightiness “Anthony found that he was living with a girl of tremendous nervous tension and of the most high-handed selfishness.”  (Book Two, Chapter 1)

Long before disaster strikes him, Anthony intuits that his way of life cannot last forever: “He had been futile in longing to drift and dream;  no one drifted except to maelstroms, no one dreamed without his dreams becoming fantastic nightmares of indecision and regret.” (Book Two, Chapter 2) Then there is Gloria’s howl when she for the first time realises, after she has had a screen test, that she is 29 and her beauty is fading. She looks in a mirror and “ ‘Oh, my pretty face,’ she whispered passionately grieving, ‘Oh my pretty face! Oh, I don’t want to live without my pretty face! Oh, what’s happened?’ ” (Book Three, Chapter 2)

It has to be noted that there is much unlikely dialogue in this novel with elevated language out of character and sounding like words spoken in a melodrama. In Book Two, Chapter 1 Gloria is angry about Anthony’s love for old things, antiques etc. and she launches into a long tirade when they visit the preserved home of Robert E. Lee, giving an articulate argument about the irrelevance of the past. In Book Two, Chapter 2, after they have had a quarrel, she says “It seemed last night… that all the part of me you loved, the part that was worth knowing, all the pride and fire, was gone. I knew that what was left of me would always love you but never in quite the same way.” This is really Fitzgerald’s diagnosis of Gloria’s situation, not something that Gloria herself would have said. In the same chapter Maury Noble gives a whole lecture about his experience and how he has learnt that life teaches you nothing. Again, this reads like a gratuitous tirade inserted by Fitzgerald to illustrate the blasé mood of young, affluent people of the time. He was often criticised for the way, in The Beautiful and Damned, that he often intruded in his narrative to make admonitory points about his characters.

One trouble in reading Fitzgerald is to assume that most of his work is disguised autobiography. It is easy to play this game as, in later years, Fitzgerald admitted that Anthony and Gloria were really versions of Fitzgerald himself and his wife Zelda Sayre. Zelda was a “belle” from the South, to which she sometimes wished to return, and Fitzgerald was drafted into the army and sent South, as in the novel. But the novel is not entirely autobiographical, even if academics have diligently attempted to identify which of Anthony’s college friend was based on which of Fitzgerald’s college friends. Besides which, unlike Anthony Patch, Fitzgerald went to Princeton, not to Harvard. More to the point, in 1922, when The Beautiful and Damned was published, Fitzgerald and Zelda were beginning to go down the slippery slope of alcoholism – their worst years came later. In the novel, the ambitious author Richard Caramel has a hit in his early twenties with a sensational novel The Demon Lover… but after this success Caramel is lured into writing profitable trash for magazines and film scenarios. This appears to be Fitzgerald mocking himself. He too had a hit in his early twenties (This Side of Paradise) and he too wrote profitably for magazines. But it was only much later, in the 1930s, that he became a Hollywood scenario hack.

So much for the plot and the context of the novel. But what does it add up to? As I read it, I find an author criticising the obsession with youth and the fear of ageing, regret for the past that has gone and the loss of youthful beauty. In spite of this, Fitzgerald was essentially a Romantic. It is telling that his favourite poet was John Keats, a great poet for sure but loved most fervently by adolescents who want to preserve the idea of an ideal, childlike beauty and simplicity, where there are no worldly challenges and complications. But romantic idealist though he was, Fitzgerald understood that this was a dream that could not be sustained. Age comes. Beauty fades and hard reality kicks in. Anthony and Gloria live in a long daydream, and when reality strikes they fall apart .

Something Thoughtful

 Nicholas Reid reflects in essay form on general matters and ideas related to literature, history, popular culture and the arts, or just life in general. You are free to agree or disagree with him.

                                            U.F.O.s AND MY TIN-FOIL HAT

I may or may not have mentioned before on this blog that, for my health, I take a long walk every morning, either just before or just after the sun has risen. And as I indulge this habit, I listen through my ear-plugs to podcasts, usually about politics, history or (if I’m in a frivolous mood) real-life detective murder stories. Failing all these, I listen to good jazz. But a couple of months ago, I decided to listen to something very different for a change. I tuned into a long series called The U.F.O. Rabbit Hole, an American production narrated, scripted and presented by a woman called Kelly Chase. She has a very assertive American voice except when she is interviewing “experts” in the field of U.F.O.s and other such phenomena. The series ran to over 36 episodes, each being an hour or more-than-an-hour-long.

The intro made it clear that the series was buoyed by the Pentagon’s recent decision to declare that they believed there were some U.F.O.s which they could not account for… so this opened the path for all sorts of speculation.

The U.F.O. Rabbit Hole began in a reasonable tone, at least in the first three episodes. Were U.F.O.s simply human technology made by foreign countries other than the United States?  The first boom in interest about U.F.O.s came in the late 1940s, shortly after the Second World War, when Americans feared that the U.S.S.R. might have created more sophisticated weapons than the Americans had. This proved to be untrue. Then there were rumours [and still are] that U.F.O.s were the result of secret American projects, not made public. This was at least possible. But what if U.F.Os. were extra-terrestrial? … well, maybe. In these early episodes, Kelly Chase was fairly even-handed, calling out obvious frauds but leaving room for belief in extra-terrestrial visits. But then the series began to dip into sheer fantasy. Could the U.F.O.s actually be our own descendants who had mastered time-travel, coming back to us from thousands of years in the future to show us the wonders of their advanced technology… Oh dear. Now we were losing the plot

And it got worse. Kelly Chase gave us a couple of episodes about a certain Tom Delonge, who was purported to have had interviews with C.I.A. agents and high ranking officials in the Pentagon, and who also talked of extra-terrestrial-based machines being constructed in secret by the military.  Possible… but less probable when Delonge also claimed that there were rival gods perpetually warring with one another in the skies and deliberately fomenting war on Earth.

Sure, in later episodes there were sober interviews with academics who suggested a little scepticism but who usually ended up championing the idea of real extra-terrestrial visitations on Earth. And then the episodes turned into really esoteric stuff. There were episodes about ancient societies and how they had created buildings and ideas far in advance of our own technology now… so to achieve what they achieved must have been with extra-terrestrial assistance!!! And all ancient apparitions in all ancient religions were actually extra-terrestrial visitations!!! Then there were fully three episodes which told listeners that the Nazis had occultist ideas and obviously this was originated by extra-terrestrial influence… and there were searches of Antarctica and Atlantis. And – goodness knows why – there were episodes which dipped into Socrates’ (or Plato’s) fable of the cave, a philosophical discourse here hijacked as having relevance to extra-terrestrial intervention.

Dear reader, I finally gave up on the series at episode number 19 out of the more-than-36 episodes that are available. Bear in mind, please, that most episodes were longer than an hour and I would have listened to about 25 hours before I said “Enough!” I had given it a fair trial. I was not bringing in a superficial judgement. Verdict: Despite some intelligent speculation, most of it was high-falutin’ twaddle. And I will not start wearing a tin-foil hat.

So let me give my idea of U.F.O.s.

I would truly be very happy if somebody could definitively prove that the Loch Ness Monster actually existed. Likewise I would truly be happy if somebody could definitively prove that extra-terrestrial beings are visiting us. But the hard fact is that after all the supposed sighting of extra-terrestrial beings, after all the theories and conspiracy theories proposed, after all the un-verified tales of people being kidnapped by extra-terrestrials and having surgery performed on them, all we are left with is speculation, rumour and fiction… much of it being nonsense.

So where do I stand? Am I debunking the whole idea of extra-terrestrial beings? Not really. My reasoning is this: where we live is a tiny planet which circles around a small-to-medium-sized star. In the galaxy where we live, there are millions of stars surrounded by  planets. And our galaxy is only one of untold galaxies. There are not millions or billions but trillions more planets than a human being can understand. The universe is vast. It defies reason to think that, nowhere else in the universe, there are planets with intelligent beings – at least as intelligent or more intelligent than we are. This being so probable, it is quite possible that such advanced intelligent beings have visited, or will visit, our small, limited, planet. But as of this time, there is no verifiable evidence that such an event has yet happened.

Monday, March 25, 2024

Something New

We feature each fortnight Nicholas Reid's reviews and comments on new and recent books.  

“KNOWLEDGE IS A BLESSING ON YOUR MIND – Selected Writings, 1980-2020” by Anne Salmond (Auckland University Press, $NZ65)

Dame Anne Salmond, anthropologist and historian, is by now one of New Zealand’s most esteemed scholars, an expert in her fields and prolific in her research and writing. Quite apart from the very many papers and articles she has written, she has also produced seven authoritative books on Maori and Pasifika themes and on the interaction of Polynesians and Pakeha.

In gathering together a collection of her writings over forty years, she chose as a title Knowledge is a Blessing On Your Mind. The phrase came from one of her mentors, the erudite Maori elder Eruera Sterling, about whom Salmond wrote in her book Eruera: The Teachings of a Maori Elder. It was from Eruera’s teaching that she began to see anthropology in a new light. She understood that “Eruera’s teachings come out of a chiefly tradition, centred on whakapapa and politics and shaped by the powers of the ancestors – mana, ihi, wehi and tapu. They have led me to reflect about knowledge in the European academic tradition and in the Maori world, and to look carefully at my chosen profession of anthropology.” (p.60)

 In 2013, she was interviewed at length by Cris Shore and Susanna Trnka in which she articulated some of her main ideas: “For me it’s not so much learning about Maori life, it’s actually about learning from it. This is where I think that anthropology has to be heading. It can’t stay within the Western tradition for all of its key conceptions and insights.  If the post-colonial debates have taught us anything, it is that people from other societies don’t appreciate being objectified, turned into items of curiosity for detached inspection.” (p.47) And in the same interview she said “I see anthropology as a kind of comparative philosophy that helps us to bring to light our own unexamined assumptions – about the world and how best to inhabit it – and to generate new ideas and conceptions from this fundamental rethinking. The arrogance of the past – the presumption that the ‘West’ has a monopoly on ‘advanced’ ideas and knowledge….has rightly been attacked…” (p.51) This approach is affirmed in the very last item in the book, the brief comment headed “What is Anthropology?”

Knowledge is a Blessing On Your Mind comprises 500-plus large pages before end-notes and index. It is a formidable book which has to be read carefully. Between chapters Salmond gives detailed accounts of the marae, museums, universities, archives and seminars she has attended and the anthropologists and historians whom she has conferred with – in effect, she gives us a sort of academic autobiography.

In reading my way through this very impressive collection I found myself sorting out the most essential and informative essays; and the essays or commentary that are related to [once] topical matters, polemics and personal connections.

Of the latter, I include “Institutional Racism at the University of Auckland” (1983) which was originally published in the Auckland students paper Craccum, advocating the real need for a Maori marae on campus. “Antipodean Crab Antics” (1994) is Anne Salmond’s spirited response to the negative review of her book Two Worlds which had been written by the philosopher Peter Munz. “McDonald Among the Maori” (1990) deals with Salmond’s Scottish ancestry and how it was connected to New Zealand. It is mainly a tribute to James McDonald, her great-great grandfather, and how he became deeply immersed in Maori customs and arts, and was a pioneer in cinematography, capturing on film images of Maori life in the early 20th century. Two articles are headed as “Of Women”. One is called “Women and Democracy”, a speech Salmond gave on how there was equity for Maori women and men, who had responsible positions in iwi in pre-colonial times. The other is a newspaper article she wrote in 2016, refuting the argument of Alan Duff (author of Once Were Warriors) that Maori domestic violence was the result of violent Maori traditions. All these articles are informative, expressed clearly and still well worth reading. There is only one article I found difficult to read. This is “Theoretical Landscapes: On Cross Cultural Conceptions of Knowledge” (1982), basically about how metaphor is over-used in too many anthropologic texts. Some of its post-modern language was beyond me, and would have to be untangled for me by a linguistic specialist. In contrast “Pathways in Te Ao Maori” (1984), related to an exhibition and considering taonga that were hidden away in archives, was part of a catalogue, and hence written in a very accessible style as it gave a clear account of varieties of iwi whom Captain Cook encountered in his voyages around New Zealand.

While these texts are all interesting, informative and [with one exception] readable, they are not the most important texts. For an ignorant Pakeha like me, far more enlightening are the major and more detailed essays, which I will now tackle one by one.

Maori Epistemologies (1985) was, says Salmond, “ written as a riposte to metropolitan assumptions about the superiority of modernist knowledge, and was argued as cogently as I knew how.” (p.80) She sets out to show how complex and sophisticated traditional Maori thinking was, and she analyses in detail the traditional concepts viz. Matauranga, meaning reliable knowledge and how to communicate and preserve it ; Wananga, being the Maori conception of the universe, including the role of ancestral histories [which were taonga] ; and Tikanga, being the laws and schools preserving the laws; Korero, being discussion, debate and polemics among experts, for lore was passed down by experts - but such experts were aware that other iwi than their own could have a different idea of cosmology and different ideas of the origin stories. Also, Salmond notes, in pre-colonial times Maori understood Mataurenga and Wananga should be held as separate from mere fables, known as korero tara. Tales like those of Maui came into this category. In effect Salmond is proving in Maori Epistemologies that Maori had a very sophisticated and detailed understanding of both the cosmos and human origins, amounting to an advanced philosophy.

Ruatara’s Dying (1993) was originally the last chapter of Salmond’s Between Two Worlds, concentrating of the different perceptions of death as held by Maori and Pakeha.

The Trial of the Cannibal Dog, or, Why Did Captain Cook Die? (1996) is a very detailed article which later became the last chapter of Salmond’s book of the same name. Salmond makes convincingly the case that, progressively, Captain Cook became disillusioned in his three Pacific voyages. He moved from seeing the Polynesian peoples as welcoming and peaceful, to seeing their hostility, cannibalism (not in all Polynesian islands, but certainly in New Zealand) and aggression. As well as this, Cook’s crews became more discontented as they were taken to bleak destinations far from decent provisioning – such as Cook’s forays into the wild southern seas, as near as possible to Antarctica as an 18th century wooden ship could go. Discontent became anger and Cook, who had generally been lenient in punishing malcontents, became more and more disciplinarian. It all spilled over when Cook reached Hawaii. There was a major clash between the Hawaiians and Cook’s crew when Hawaiian sacred protocols were violated, and in the ensuing fight Cook was killed. This is only one part of Salmond’s narrative, for the earlier pages of this account concern the radically different ways Polynesians and Europeans regarded dogs and other animals, especially when it came to the provision of food.

Their Body is Different, Our Body is Different (2004) examines European and Polynesian interactions, especially with regard to different concepts of navigation – and with the inevitable mutual misunderstandings and Europeans’ unawareness of the importance of ritual.

Possibly the most crucial work in Knowledge is a Blessing On Your Mind are the 114-long pages devoted to Te Tiriti o Waitangi, which Salmond was commissioned (in 2010) to write for the Waitangi Tribunal. She makes minute scrutiny of the treaty, how it was understood, how Rangatira basically saw it as the Crown was offering protection but not as imposing British sovereignty, the process by which the treaty was written, and the two different languages in which it was devised. Then, in detail, Salmond gives a collection of the spoken or written reactions to the treaty made by Rangatira (and a few Pakeha) in the months following the signing at Waitangi, when the treaty was taken to different locations on the North Island to be ratified. As did Ruth Ross decades before, Salmond concludes that the English-language version of the treaty was merely a draft, and the only valid version of the treaty was the Maori-language one…but British authority gradually took the English-language version to be definitive. [On this blog you may see my review of Bain Atwood’s A Bloody Difficult Subject  which covers much of this territory.]

The last essays in this collection are categorised as “On Environmental Questions” . One deals with how different Maori and Pakeha conceptions of personhood are – this being in the context of “The Whanganui River Settlement” that deemed the river to be a living person.  The other has to do with the menace of climate change, which is causing the sea to rise and threatening Pacific island states.

As I hope this simplified and inept review of Knowledge is a Blessing On Your Mind has given you at least some sense of Anne Salmond’s achievements. While she does criticise many Pakeha misconceptions or misrepresentations of Maori life and lore; and while she faults many of the older texts written by Pakeha anthropologists in the late 19th and early 20th centuries; she does not blanketly dismiss with contempt all Pakeha pioneer attempts to reach some understanding about Maori customs, beliefs, rituals, and politics. Elsdon Best still has worthwhile things to say to us. And of course, as an anthropologist, Anne Salmond knows that there is no society or nation that is not flawed.

 

Something Old

 Not everything worth reading is hot off the press. In this section, we recommend "something old" that is still well worth reading. "Something Old" can mean anything from a venerable and antique classic to a good book first published four or more years ago.    

ALL YOU NEED TO KNOW ABOUT THE NOVELS AND STORIES OF F. SCOTT FITZGERALD – PART ONE,  F. Scott Fitzgerald, This Side of Paradise

            There is a canonical author who worried me for a long time. I had read a few of his works but had never read my way systematically through all his works, and I was therefore worried that I had perhaps misjudged him and had a superficial understanding of him. Complicating matters was the fact that his life story is as well-known as his literary work. Indeed many people think they know all there is to know about this writer because they have been told that he was at his peak in the so-called “roaring twenties”, that he invented the term “the Jazz Age”, that he had a spectacularly unstable marriage, eventually succumbed to alcoholism, declined as a writer, turned out much hack-work in his later years, and died when he was only in his early forties. The “legend” of the man has almost overshadowed his work.

I am of course referring to Francis Scott Key Fitzgerald (1896-1940), who signed himself F. Scott Fitzgerald.

Confession of my reading history: I had read his best-known novel The Great Gatsby when I was a teenager. Who hasn’t? It often appears as a set text in high schools. Oddly enough I had also read his unfinished novel The Last Tycoon, but for a very pragmatic reason. I was a film reviewer in 1976 when the film version of The Last Tycoon came out, and I wanted to compare film with novel when I wrote my newspaper review. I’d also read some of Fitzgerald’s short-stories and essays (“The Diamond as Big as the Ritz” etc.). But that was my full acquaintance with F. Scott Fitzgerald.

So, in the last few months, I sat down and read my way through all five of Fitzgerald’s novels in sequence and followed this up by reading some of his shorter works. My findings are what I will torture you with in the next six or seven postings.

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Photo of F.Scott Fitzgerald when he was a fresher at Princeton
 

            I have rarely read a novel by an esteemed novelist that is as badly organised, disorderly, messy, repetitive, sophomoric and uncertain of style as F. Scott Fitzgerald’s first novel This Side of Paradise. I am also still bemused that such a novel at once became a major bestseller and immediately made Fitzgerald a celebrity. I will get onto these matters later in this review.  But before I do, I will tell an anecdote which will at first seem totally irrelevant to you.

            When I was a teenager, I had to spend four terms (a year and a third) in a boarding school, because my parents had gone overseas and my siblings (all of them older than me) had already left home. I was not used to the boarding school ethos and didn’t particularly enjoy it. Up to that time I had been a proud “day boy”, cycling to and from school every day. In this alien environment, I sought out books that I could bury my head in, as a form of escapism. One “free” day, when we were allowed to go into Auckland Central, I discovered in a bookshop a big, fat paperback – about 700 pages in length - in which I became immersed. It was Compton Mackenzie’s Sinister Street, originally published in two parts in 1913 and 1914. It was a Bildungsroman, that is, the story of a young man growing through adolescence to adult maturity. In its day Sinister Street was regarded as scandalous because its protagonist, Michael Fane, and his sister were the illegitimate offspring of an aristocrat. Michael Fane studies at Oxford and revels in its “dreaming spires”. He falls in love with a young woman whom he tries to rescue from prostitution, but he fails. He goes through an intense religious experience and by the end of the novel he seems destined to become a Catholic priest. The language was often lush and romantic, idealistic, crammed with descriptions of place and mood, and just the sort of thing I could happily get lost in. I’m pretty sure that if I were to read it now I would find it melodramatic, overwrought, over-the-top, filled with purple prose and improbable dialogue, and altogether badly dated… but it served my purpose when I was a teenager.

            So what has all this to do with F. Scott Fitzgerald’s first novel? Simple. Fitzgerald read and loved Sinister Street and in many ways his debut novel was inspired by it. Compton Mackenzie was one of his literary idols, and Fitzgerald followed his path by writing a Bildungsroman. The title This Side of Paradise came from a poem by Rupert Brooke, another of Fitzgerald’s literary idols. I know these things because I read This Side of Paradise in the very-annotated Cambridge Edition, which also gave me a detailed account of the gestation of the novel.

To put it briefly, it goes like this: Fitzgerald had been an indifferent student at Princeton, more involved in writing comedy shows for the university’s amateur performances than sticking to his study. He left the university without a degree. In 1917, when he was 21, he began writing the first version of what would later become This Side of Paradise, which he originally called The Romantic Egotist. It was written in the first-person. The publisher he chose, Scribner, turn it down but encouraged him to re-write it. In 1918 – during the First World War - he enlisted in the army, but never saw action overseas as the war ended before he could be involved. However at the military camp down South where he was trained, he met and fell in love with Zelda Sayre, usually designated by critics as “a Southern belle”. They got engaged, but she broke the engagement fearing that he wasn’t wealthy enough to support her. He went back to his parents’ home (in St. Paul in the Middle-West) and diligently re-wrote his novel hoping that he would win literary fame and become more acceptable to Zelda. The novel was now told in the third-person. A second time Scribner turned it down, but Scribner’s best-known reader Maxwell Perkins was more encouraging and said the novel would be publishable if only Fitzgerald could come up with a satisfactory ending. As it stood, the novel seemed to go nowhere. Fitzgerald changed the novel’s ending a little and – third time lucky – Scribner published it and immediately it was the best-seller of 1920. Fitzgerald was 23. Buoyed by his success, Fitzgerald again proposed to Zelda. This time she accepted him and they married. He was now able to demand great sums from magazines for his short stories. His future seemed stable. He was feted as the spokesman for what would now be called youth culture.

 

          The first jacket illustration for This Side of Paradise. The woman and man were based on Zelda and F. Scott Fitzgerald... very loosely.

            This Side of Paradise is divided into two “Books”, Book One having what was the original name of the novelThe Romantic Egotist”. The chapter headings throughout tend to be pretentious (“Spires and Gargoyles”, “Narcissus Off Duty”, “Experiment in Convalescence”, “The Supercilious Sacrifice’ etc.).

Amory Blaine is the son of a wealthy family. His pretentious mother Beatrice coddles and protects him when he is a young child, and he quickly becomes arrogant with grandiose ideas about himself. : “He was resentful against all those in authority over him, and this, combined with a lazy indifference toward his work, exasperated every master in his school.” (Part One, Chapter 1) The family is Catholic and he is sent to a Catholic prep school, a boarding school, St. Regis, when he is fifteen. He is greatly influenced by an erudite senior priest, Monsignor Thayer Darcy, who becomes a life-long friend. When he gets to Princeton, with its mock-medieval architecture, he has exactly the same sort of romantic reaction that Michael Fane had when he first saw the “dreaming spires” of Oxford. Amory sees, in somewhat purply prose:  The night mist fell. From the moon it rolled, clustered about the spires and towers and then settled below them, so that the dreaming peaks were still in lofty aspiration toward the sky. Figures that dotted the day like ants now brushed along as shadowy ghosts, in and  out of the foreground. The Gothic halls and cloisters were infinitely more mysterious as they loomed suddenly out of darkness, outlined each by myriad faint squares of yellow light. Indefinitely from somewhere a bell boomed the quarter hour and Amory, pausing by the sundial, stretched himself  full length on the damp grass…..” etc. etc. etc.   (Part One, Chapter 2)

Amory’s experience at Princeton is in large part made of making sure he is part of clubs, admiring football matches, trying – after his fresher year –  to ingratiate himself with more well-off sophomores, partying, flirting with girls from outside the university, and of course being involved in the light comedy performances that the students wrote. [All of which was true of Fitzgerald. The novel is very autobiographical in many places.] He also feels true love for the first time with a severely intellectual girl called Isabelle… but she ceases to be impressed with him when his conversation is so much taken up with himself… and his academic grades are too poor. He is no longer  one of the writers for the college’s newspaper the “Princetonian”.

Amory does, however, have a sort of intellectual life. Among other things he is always concerned about the difference between personality [the way one superficially presents oneself] and personage [having grown into a person with a guiding sense of morality]. This matter is occasionally raised in correspondence Amory has with Monsignor Darcy. Be it noted, too, that twice in the novel, Amory believes he is in the presence of the devil. Along with his relgious upbringing, he has a strong sense of evil as a real force. Discussing poetry with his friend Tom D’Invilliers, he declaims what his favourite type of poetry is after he has just recited Keats’s “Ode to a Nightingale”  ‘ I’ll never be a poet,’ said Amory as he finished. ‘I’m not enough of a sensualist really – there are only a few obvious things that I notice as primarily beautiful: women, spring evenings, music at night, the sea; I don’t catch the subtle things like ‘silver snarling trumpets’. I may turn out an intellectual, but I’ll never write anything but mediocre poetry.’  (Part One, Chapter 2) In short, he is a romantic whose beliefs are taking the place of the religion he is slowly disconnecting himself from. In the course of the novel he produces many poems – sometimes satirical but usually lushly romantic.

As some students do, Amory also has many intense discussions about the meaning of modern literature, philosophy and politics. In fact so many novels are quoted in This Side of Paradise that some critics have suggested Fitzgerald hadn’t read many of the texts his protagonist Amory ostensibly reads. As the First World War rumbles on, there are also student debates about the righteousness of waging war.  A pacifist and radical student Burne Holiday becomes a major topic of discussion – but when Amory discusses the matter with his friend Tom D’Invilliers, Amory reveals his essential enduring narcissism when he declares “I tell you… he’s the first contemporary I’ve ever met who I’ll admit is my superior in mental capacity. ” (Part One, Chapter 4) Amory’s father dies but Amory has little reaction apart from examining his family’s wealth and noticing that much of it has gone. He goes partying in New York with other college boys, gets hopelessly drunk and disoriented, but still persuades himself that he is in control and his imaginative mind is still working. He almost falls in love with a charming young Catholic widow called Clara Page, who has two young children. Bored with lessons and lectures, Amory decides to enlist in the army.

At which point Fitzgerald suddenly skips over two years and we are into Book Two called “The Education of a Personage”, the Bildungsroman idea being that Amory is on the brink of becoming a fully-formed adult. Except that it isn’t true. Amory now falls madly, truly, deeply in love with Rosalind, a debutante from a very wealthy family. Fitzgerald characterises her thus: “She is one of those girls who need never make the slightest effort to have men fall in love with them . Two types seldom do: dull men are usually afraid of her cleverness – intellectual men are usually afraid of her beauty. All other men are hers by natural prerogative.” … But also “She is by no means a model character. There are long periods where she cordially loathes her whole family. She is quite unprincipled; her philosophy is carpe diem for herself and laissez faire for others.”  (Part Two, Chapter 1) “She’s life and hope and happiness, my whole world now.” says Amory of Rosalind. (Part Two, Chapter 1). Fortunately for Amory, Rosalind has fallen in love with him too. This will be his greatest love. Except that the matter of money intervenes. Rosalind’s family want her to marry wealth, and so she dutifully prepares to do so because Amory, now out of college, earns only a small wage writing copy for an advertising firm [as Fitzgerald did at the time when Zelda Sayre had rejected him.]

Despair. Amory goes on a great bender. In his mental haze he resigns from the advertising company. He reads. He seems to lose all the religious feeling he used to have. He has a long discussion with his friend Tom D’Invilliers about the status of literature in the United States, damning most authors as frustrated young men so often do. He receives a letter from Monsignor Darcy offering him some consolation, but he finds it harder to connect with the priest. And he goes walking in the rural wilderness where, by chance, he meets a wild child, younger that he but very shrewd, Eleanor Ramilly. Could this be his true love? Nope, because she has some strange ideas that he can’t endorse. She is an atheist, an admirer of Nietzsche, a hedonist, immersed in the “decadent” authors. But after they have parted, she stays in his mind. He frames her in romantic terms: “For years afterwards when Amory thought of Eleanor he seemed still to hear the wind sobbing around him and sending little chills into the places beside his heart. The night when they rode up the slope and watched the cold moon float through the clouds, he lost a further part of him that nothing could restore; and when he lost it he lost also the power of regretting it. Eleanor was, say, the last time that evil crept close to Amory under the mask of beauty, the last weird mystery that held him with wild fascination and pounded his soul to flakes.” (Part Two, Chapter 3) Beware beautiful women with odd ideas... and note Amory's persistent religious concepts, even if they are fading in hin. Amory reads that Rosalind is about to marry, and that Monsignor Darcy has died. The woman he loved most and the man who most compassionately guided him are gone. He goes to Monsignor Darcy’s elaborate funeral, admiring the clerical pageantry of it but now more alienated from the religion.   He becomes reckless, partying with rowdies who, to his surprise, have booked a room “for immoral purposes” with a woman. (Not that he himself loses his virginity.)  In a weird sort of repentance for his past actions, he is even prepared to take the responsibility for this unsavoury event, but luckily he isn’t charged for any felony.

He is now penniless in New York, both his parents now dead and their money gone, sceptical, loathing the smell of the proletariat when he rides in public transport. He gives up his earlier beliefs and now scorns many of the books he once admired. He understands that he will have to live by money – which he doesn’t have. Is this the maturity and a blossoming into adulthood that a standard Bildungsroman narrative requires? Obviously not. For this reader at any rate, in his last chapter Amory seems still like a peevish child whose romantic ideas have been punctured… or perhaps he could be likened to the type of students who suddenly realise that their university years don’t necessarily equip them for material success or prestigious positions. But there is another way of reading it. Perhaps Fitzgerald is deliberately defying the standard Bildungsroman ending, wherein the mature young man reaches fruitful maturity. After all, that is not the outcome for all young people in their early twenties, and some people don’t reach maturity until many years later… or not at all.

The closing words of the novel (Part Two, Chapter 5) are “There was no God in his heart, he knew; his ideas were still in riot; there was ever the pain of memory, the regret for his lost youth – yet the waters of disillusion had left a deposit on his soul, responsibility and a love of life, the faint stirring of old ambitions and unrealized dreams. But – oh, Rosalind! – Rosalind…. ‘I’m a poor substitute at best,’ he said sadly. And he could not tell why the struggle was worthwhile, why he had determined to use to the utmost himself and his heritage from the personalities he had passed… He stretched out his arms to the crystalline, radiant sky. ‘I know myself, he cried, ‘but that is all.’ ” 

 

As I have synopsised This Side of Paradise, I might have left the impression that it is a smoothly sequential narrative. In fact it is more like the novel that is as “badly organised, disorderly, messy, repetitive, sophomoric and uncertain of style” that I mentioned near the beginning of this review. There are sudden, glaring changes in style and many inconsistences in the way the narrative is presented. Perhaps as a modernist experiment, Fitzgerald presents the whole story of Amory falling in love with Rosalind (Book Two, Chapter 1, “The Debutante”) in the form of a play script, complete with stage directions. In Book One, Chapter 2 Amory is traumatised by the death of a fellow student in a car crash… yet avery short time later, we find Amory happily pursuing his first love Isabelle.  Fitzgerald has an “Interlude” between the novel’s two “Books” which, in five pages, jumps from 1917 to 1919 and therefore very briefly rushes over Amory’s military service… and surely military service would have had a major impact on how he developed mentally. The chapter concerning the pagan Eleanor (Book Two, Chapter 3, “Young Irony”), coming after Amory’s urban angst when losing Rosalind, is frankly a dive into pure romantic fantasy, with Eleanor discovered in a haystack, beautiful, often seen in moonlight, half characterised as witch or siren etc. etc. As for the last chapter in the book (Book Two, Chapter 5, “The Egotist Becomes a Personage”), it contains an incredibly improbable sequence wherein Amory, making his way back to Princeton, is given a ride in a millionaire’s car and he passes the time lecturing the millionaire on the benefits of [some sort of] Socialism… though again, Fitzgerald could be suggesting that the still-callow young man is now embracing a new sort of religion after having discarded an old one. Now that I’ve given you this rant, it’s only fair that I should note many of the novel’s first readers found Fitzgerald’s style daring, refreshing, revealing a new and interesting way to tell a story… but I stay with my view that stylistically the novel is a bit of a mess.

            All of this brings me to the major puzzle. Why did This Side of Paradise become so quickly a massive bestseller in 1920? Apparently, in 1920, it was seen as daring for a novel to have university students getting drunk, partying, having many girlfriends, driving around in cars with girls, messing with “immoral purposes”, being involved in three or four love affairs, not taking study all that seriously and on the whole not behaving as an earlier generation had done. This Side of Paradise was published only a couple of years after the [First World] War had finished and there was a sense of relief, an easing of mores… and the fact that Prohibition had been voted in 1919 only encouraged younger Americans to drink more alcohol than their parents did.  The behaviour of Amory and his student friends chimed with all this. In no time Fitzgerald’s novel was identified with flappers, vamps, “the Jazz Age”, the “speakeasy” etc. even if these things was only a very limited part of what he wrote about. Seen from a century later, the novel is far from being sensational. Of course there are no explicit sex scenes (they couldn’t be published in 1920 anyway), the nearest thing being the thwarted events that take place in a hotel in Part Two, Chapter 4. The behaviour of students in the novel now seems comparatively mild. Kissing isn’t an outrageous event. In short, as seen now, the novel reflects mores from long ago. They belong to the past. And even in 1920, most of the novel is not concerned with things that would then have seemed sinful.

            Footnote: I have found one very annoying thing about Fitzgerald’s novels. Many episodes are built on the author’s autobiography and some characters are based on real people. This means that there is now an industry among scholars working out which character is based on whom. It has been determined that a much admired Princeton football star had the name Amory, so that was the name Fitzgerald gave to his protagonist. Likewise the scornful Isabelle was Fitzgerald’s first real love Ginevra King. And his major heart’s desire Rosalind was, not surprisingly, his wife Zelda. Most interesting, however, is Amory’s advisor Monsignor Darcy, who was based on Fitzgerald’s advisor Monsignor Sigourney Fay. Not only does the monsignor appear in the novel, but he actually contributed to it. Part of the letters the fictitious Monsignor Darcy sends to Amory were letters that the real Monsignor Sigourney Fay sent to Fitzgerald. Likewise, in the novel’s “Interlude” the poem Mons. Darcy sends to Amory when he is about to go to war was written to Fitzgerald by Mons. Fay. I could say more about Fitzgerald’s connection with Catholicism. Apparently when he was a student at Princeton he regularly went to Mass. But whereas the hero of Compton Makenzie’s Sinister Street Michael Fane was gradually drawn closer to the Catholic Church,  Fitzgerald’s Amory and Fitzgerald himself were gradually drawn away from it.  Even so, there are many tropes and beliefs in This Side of Paradise that suggest a Catholic sensibility… even if they are not apparent to the uninitiated.