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“NIGHT HORSE” by Elizabeth
Smither (Auckland University Press, $NZ24:99)
I almost breathe a sigh of relief as I pick up, and at
first flick idly through, Elizabeth Smither’s latest (eighteenth) collection of
poetry Night Horse, before I get down
to the serious business of reading my way through it. Across 70 pages, here are
60 individual poems, most occupying a single page only. Individual poems – not
cycles of poems and not poems organised around some stated theme. Such
“thematic” collections (“concept albums” I often call them) seem to be the only
arrangement that many publishers of poetry now expect. But here we have the
naked, raw individual poem to encounter, and that is the way I like it. In
fact, that was the way I liked it when I reviewed Smither’s last collection The Blue Coat.
Of
course I’ve been to Smither Country before. I know that she likes the moment of
epiphany: the encounter, often with small and everyday things, in which a
larger mindscape can be found – that element of transformation where the familiar
becomes unfamiliar. Of course I know that in this volume you can you read the
poet’s preoccupations and indeed you will encounter strings of poems on
approximately the same theme. But they are not cycles. They are not intended to
be read as a sequence. And the poet’s dry, ironical wit would undercut the
implied solemnity of a poetic sequence anyway.
When
I have in front of me a collection such as this, I always query why a
particular poem has been chosen to give the collection its title. So to the poem
“Night Horse” (p.20), which I here quote in full:
In the field by the driveway
as I turn the car a horse
is stepping in the moonlight.
Its canvas coat shines, incandescent.
Around its eyes a mask
a Sienese horse might wear.
No banners stir the air, but mystery
in the way it is stepping
as if no human should see
the night horse going about its business.
The soft grass bowing to the silent hooves
the head alert, tending where
the moonlight glows and communes
in descending swoops that fall
through the air like ribbons
as the horse moves in a trance
so compelling, so other-worldly
it doesn’t see the car lights.
In
its six stanzas, note first the simplicity and directness of the language, and
how it begins as a documentary depiction of a real thing in a real world. This
is a night horse, not a nightmare – something seen in the physical world, a
horse caught in a car’s headlights, wearing its canvas covering. The poet can
see something heraldic about it – like one of those horses that run the
medieval palio in Siena. There is
something magical about it. The grass “bows”
to it as if it were mejestic; the moonlight “communes” with the horse and falls “like ribbons”, and the horse is “other-worldly” and in a “trance”.
When we go “incandescent”, we are on
the edge of the transcendent. AND YET at the heart of the poem there is the
unmagical and commonsensical line “the
horse goes about its business” and at the end “it doesn’t see the car lights”. The point is this – the magic is in
the beholder’s eyes, not in the physical scene. The horse is not relating to
the human being. The horse is acting in a way that is specifically its own and
unconcerned about human perceptions. It is an everyday (everynight?) creature
transformed into something else by the poet. In a way, this is a poem about
otherness. The horse is magical only because its world, its mindset, is really
unknowable to us.
It
is foolish to extrapolate from this one poem a prolific poet’s whole technique,
but I can say that this controlled piece of observation does indicate much that
is in this collection. There are other poems here that present an imaginative
idea very similar to “Night Horse”, such as “Morning blackbird on the lawn”
(p.25) where a [detached-from-us] bird is “levering
up a worm, is concentrating / as if there’s something deeper even than music /
deeper even than the beauty that covers everything”. Or like “The mountain”
(p.45) where a snow-capped mountain seen at night is “solid” but transformed to the status of a ghost by the viewer’s
mind
Smither
often observes small and momentary things that are worked upon by the imagination.
Take the opening poem “My mother’s house”(p.1) where a whole life is read in a
woman’s domestic routine in one night; and note some persistence of night
imagery in “Cat night” (p.18) where the ever-mysterious feline world awakes.
There
is the domestic and family scene, as there usually is in Smither’s work, and
there is much imagery in these poems of shoes, of dressing gowns, of ironed
shirts – often seen without people in them, and therefore more urgent as
mementoes of people. Stroking and playing with hair plays its part. Family
means memory – of childhood in “Swimming with our fathers” (p.3) ; of parents
in “Daybreak in dressing gowns” conundrum; and of somebody now lost in the
elegaic “Eyebrows, toenails”.
I
have said that there are “strings”of poems in this collection rather than
sequences. There is, for example, a string of poems about animals: “Cat night
(p.18); “The wedding party of animals “ (p.19); “Night horse’ (p.20) and
“Blaming the horse” (p.21). There is a string of poems about the
unselfconsciousness of a very young child [and her eating habits] “An apple tree for Ruby”, “Ruby and fruit”,
“The body of a little girl” –and later “Ruby and the Labradors” (p.24), one of
Smither’s most exquisite inventions, where two dogs “taller than her chaff-blonde hair” (p.24) most intrigue the little
girl, dwarf her, and yet become a sign of her protection. The poems
“Consolation”, “Putting a line through addresses” and “Tonia’s cemetery”
(pp.36-39) are all somehow entangled in death and finality. Later there are
poems about a dying girl and about an open casket And come to think of it, even
a longish whimsical poem like “Oysters” (pp.56-57) is about finality – or at
least the disappointment that can come after a build-up and much anticipation.
As
for the sophisticated, worldly side of life, there are poems about driving,
overseas travel (Canberra, Spain) and dining and clothes. Unsurprisingly, high
culture is here with references in poems to Mozart, Picasso, a Winged Victory
in the Louvre, ballet and Jane Austen.
It
is the poet’s good humour and wit, however, that prevents any of this volume
from from becoming solemn or self-laudatory. The world is full of familiar
things, but they can be made wonderful by a good poet.
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