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I am in a
real quandary about Lloyd Jones’ latest work. When I reviewed his Mr Pip on its first appearance [NZ Listener 7 October 2006], I was happy
to salute it (regardless of what the current film version may be like) as an
intelligent and engaging story, which made good use of a shifting narrative
perspective and had the best sort of humane values. I was pleased when it later
won the fiction section of our national book awards. But when I reviewed his
later Hand-Me-Down World [Sunday Star-Times 31 October 2010], I
found the narrative trickiness of multiple narrators an alienating effect in
all the wrong ways. Reader engagement was sacrificed to literary artifice, and
a sound central narrative idea (an African woman’s encounter with Europe)
became a pretentious and messy novel.
At his
best, Jones’ is a vividly evocative writer; but evocation for its own sake can
drown purpose. This may be true of his latest book.
There are
special sorts of problems with A History
of Silence. As its subtitle warns, it is not a novel, but a memoir.
Specifically, it is Jones’ very personal attempt to unwrap the truths about the
childhood of both his parents. Mother and father were apparently taciturn
people, tight-lipped about their past, emotionally distant and withholding
painful memories from their children. Their son intuits that there was
something traumatic in the background of each, and (now that both parents are
long dead) he sets out to find out what it was in each case.
What he uncovers is certainly an
unhappy story. His father Lew and his siblings were apparently abandoned to
orphanages by their feckless Welsh father, when their mother had died suddenly
of hydatids. The children were fed family legends about their sailor father
having “drowned at sea” when in fact he had gone off and set up another family.
More traumatic was his mother
Joyce’s childhood. In an age when extra-marital births were regarded as
scandalous, Joyce’s unmarried teenage mother Maud became pregnant (with Joyce)
to a married man whom she could not marry. Maud pretended to be a respectable
widow with child, and in that guise married a respectable man. But when he
found out the truth of her position, her husband began to mistreat little Joyce
ferociously. This meant the author’s mother grew up in an environment of
extreme domestic violence, until she was adopted into the household of another
couple – where again she was regularly beaten by an angry and disappointed
woman, who wanted her to be a substitute for her own dead biological children.
The result was that Lloyd Jones’ mother grew up knowing that she had been cast
off by her own mother, who refused to receive or speak to her even in old age.
I distort the memoir in
presenting it in these simple terms, although these are the unhappy explanatory
tales that Lloyd Jones uncovers.
Apart from filling in gaps in
family knowledge, what Jones is doing here is reflecting on the nature of
memory itself – the way (in families especially) things are repressed or hidden
or turned into legends or preserved only in rumours or broken references that
happen to crop up randomly in conversations over the years.
A History of Silence is not written in any sort of flattened,
chronological order. In part it follows the path of Lloyd Jones’ research –
leading him to Wales and Wellington and Christchurch and a Canterbury farm
among other places. It also follows his own thoughts somewhat serendipitously,
and this includes long reflections on his Hutt Valley childhood and the first
impact his parents had on him. Lloyd Jones was, apparently, the youngest of the
family, a full seventeen years younger than his entrepreneur brother Bob Jones,
who features in just a few revealing childhood anecdotes. Speaking as a
youngest child myself, I readily identify with the author’s memories of feeling
somehow left out of what the grown-ups and older siblings were talking about,
and of having to work out connections by later research.
Apparently the Jones family lived
in somewhat straitened circumstances, economies had to be made and they were
borne with a certain stoicism. Yet young Lloyd was grounded in his home, his
pet dogs and his street games. He found going on family holidays a bit of a
chore. Take this revealing account of childhood holidays, which captures
perfectly that childhood sense that nowhere but home is really as it should be:
“From one municipal camp to the next we work our way across the North
Island. There is always a ngaio pushing against the sides of the tent and
making scary shadows with its branches, and I seem to be forever standing in
lines. I long for the moment we will pack up the car and head for home. I miss
the street, the backyard, the slap of concrete and the brick side of the house
where for hours I am content to throw a tennis ball and catch it within inches
of the leaping dog and its snapping jaws. I miss the letterbox and the smell of
the clipped hedge. I long for those certainties – even the sky which has its
own particularity, shaped by the long gorsy hills that swallow and blow out
tremendous gusts of wind. The settled air of elsewhere simply feels wrong, and
when the moment comes to pull up pegs I am never so keen to help.” (p.61)
Another aspect of home life was
his father’s stoicism, which Lloyd Jones is sometimes tempted to see as a
legacy of his Welsh forebears:
“My
father’s default expression was one of vacancy. Hot tar could have been poured
inside his skull and he would not have complained. His hands were covered with
thick skin from handling steel. I saw him pick up gorse in his bare hands. I
suppose if you empty yourself out there is nothing left to scald or hurt. I
don’t have his forbearance, but I do have the expression that goes with it.”
(p.115)
In this congeries, memory, anecdote and research are held together by
one major stylistic device, and it is this which puts me in the quandary I
mentioned at the top of this notice. Repeatedly, Jones uses the big Christchurch
earthquake of February 2011 as a metaphor for memory either repressed or
recovered.
When, in Wellington, he first
hears news of the Christchurch disaster, he notes:
“This was a real disaster. Equally, it was plain to see that it had come
out of an unacknowledged past. The old maps clearly spelt out the swamp and
wetland history of the city’s foundations. But it had been overlooked or
perhaps was thought to have been triumphed over by advances in swamp-draining
techniques, then covered up with concrete and bitumen.” (p.23)
So, with that “unacknowledged
past “ bit, Christchurch is at once comparable with his family’s domestic
disaster inasmuch as the past has not been acknowledged in either case.
Later, when Jones observes some
reconstruction work going on in Barbadoes Street at the Cathedral of the
Blessed Sacrament, he notes the way teams are preserving the shattered bits of
the building stone by numbered stone for later reconstruction. This he presents
as the genesis of his own attempts to reconstruct his family’s story. He
writes:
“In its retelling, the basilica would hold true. Presumably in time it
would be as good as new, and it would be impossible to know what it had been
through. It would give the sunny impression of being outside history”….“I kept thinking about those numbered stones,
until some purpose began to take shape. I began to wonder if I might retrace
and recover something of my own past, and reassemble it in the manner of the
basilica. It was a matter of looking to see if any of the original building
blocks remained, and where I might find them.” (pp.33-34)
And so the comparisons between
macro- and micro-disasters recur regularly throughout this book. Take this late
passage where, having retrieved most of his family’s unspoken past, Jones
considers Christchurch’s experience of liquefaction, with the clear implication
that it is like his family’s past bubbling up and still having an effect on the
living:
“Yet, if
we care to find out, liquefaction has its own story to tell, not so much myth
but a creation story nonetheless. Upheaval, displacement, the formation of the
plains and swamps and peatlands, the retreat of the sea several millennia ago,
the arrival of the podocarp forest and its steady erasure by pastoralists, and
then a new weave in the landscape starting with the introduction of farming,
followed by the all-conquering cockspur grass and grazing beats – well, the
latter were more cosmetic and scenic, unlike the brew of ancient times, of
basalt and shells, and various crustaceans, and peat and swamp turning into
coal, and water locked in place by impermeable layers of peat beneath a rock
pan, and a network of waterways, some slow, some meandering, others as still as
ponds reflecting nothing but the subterranean dark. The liquefaction that sent
putrid matter bursting up across the streets of Christchurch was a postcard
from these hidden zones.
Nothing had been lost, just hidden.” (pp.159-160)
And this is my problem with A History of Silence.
Granted that the circumstances of
Jones’ parents were extremely unhappy – even traumatic - ones, are they really
comparable with a large-scale public disaster like the Christchurch earthquake,
with its large loss of life? I am not belittling the emotional pain of Lew and
Joyce Jones, but I do wonder if their son isn’t inflating the importance of
their condition by extending his metaphor as he does. As a poetic image, it
might have worked well a few times. Overused as it is, it leaves us feeling
battered by its insistence.
This isn’t the only technique of
allusion Lloyd Jones uses. There is much literary allusion. His grandmother
Maud’s status as an unwed mother, and the public shame it invited, is compared
a number of times with the situation of Hester Prynne in Hawthorne’s The Scarlet Letter. Hipper references,
with regard to the erasure of both memory and false memory, are the ones made
to Beckett’s Krapp’s Last Tape. But
at least one literary reference (first made on p.83) makes me wonder about the
reliability of the narrator. Jones tells us that while sorting through a
post-earthquake rubbish pile, he happened to find a copy of Pliny’s letters,
which just fell open at the page where Pliny describes the death of his uncle
during the eruption of Vesuvius. The intimate family detail and the public
disaster are wed in the Roman author just as they are in the modern memoirist.
I guess it’s possible that Jones turned up this volume as described, but it
does sound rather neat for his literary purpose.
As in all Jones’ work, this one
has powerful passages, keen evocation and a humane undercurrent (Jones is
careful to acknowledge the people who showed kindness and consideration to his
parents in their childhood). But the extended earthquake metaphor is quite a
hurdle.