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“RESPIRATOR – A POET LAUREATE COLLECTION, 2019-2022” by
David Eggleton (Otago University Press, $NZ35); “SAY I DO THIS – Poems
2018-2022” by C.K.Stead (Auckland University Press, $NZ35); “PAST LIVES” by
Leah Dodd (Te Herenga Waka University Press, $NZ25)
David Eggleton is a poet wide in
his interests, fecund in his output, imaginative in his conceptions, skilled in
both lyricism and satire and always ready to find use for canonical quotations
which he alters or turns to his own use. His interests in the Pacific, the sea,
animal life, the environment, colonialism and the ills of an industrial society
are well known. Often his published poems are better read to an audience than
read by a solitary reader. They are ripe for performance, joying in the
complexity and sheer fun of sounds. The poems that make up Respirator – A
Poet Laureate Collection, 2019-2022 were written (mainly) in the four years
that Eggleton was New Zealand’s poet laureate – years that saw the pandemic
(Covid 19 etc) and other woes.
A respirator is something
that helps one to breathe. Why is this collection called Respirator? The
answer is found in one section of Eggleton’s “Rahui: Lockdown Journal”. After
dealing with the restrictions, denials and fears brought on by the pandemic,
the final line is “A poem is a kind of respirator” – something that
helps us breathe in difficult times. Poetry revives or energises us.
Respirator – A Poet Laureate
Collection, is divided into seven distinct sections. Pardon me if I walk
through this collection section by section. It might seem a very pedestrian thing
for a critic of poetry to do, but then the seven sections David Eggleton has
devised each pick up a different strain, a different set of preoccupations,
from the others. This handsome hardback has on its cover a coloured photograph of a decaying
coal truck wheel in the bush [the image, with some variations, is repeated in the
black-and-white headings of each section].
This icon is most relevant to the
first of the seven sections, which is called CIRCLE, in which Eggleton is
most concerned with the continuity of life, the circle of life. In the poem “Tomorrow”,
anticipated events repeat themselves, like the eternel retour; or in the
slow and repeated growth of trees in “Generations” as “the trees / are our parents’ parents, diving down / a
millennium underground, bent round /and curled in a birth dream, till the years
/ unfold roots that twist out of rock fissures, / and climb as seedlings,
tender, growing…”. But this tale of nature’s creativity has a sour conclusion
as the great miracle of nature meets today’s pollution. Many poems in this
section are built on imagery of darkness; of things growing or dying in the
dark; the untamed swell of an Otago beach (“Otago Eight Bells”) and in “Sawmill
Empire”, not a lament but a resigned acknowledgement of the fact that noble
trees become human houses, buildings, furniture etc. Fittingly there are poems on the earthquake
destruction of Christchurch, and on windswept valleys; leavened by the
jocularity of “The Steepest Street in the World”, surely one poem ripe for public
performance. Nature and what we do with it is the key to this section.
The next section RAHUI:
LOCKDOWN JOURNAL is a twelve-part journal of having to stay in lockdown
during the pandemic. The odour and smoke of bush fires in Oz drifts over us;
then there are the first whispers of a virus originating in China. The
government has to deal with it. “Jacinda arose with the down-home hippy vibe
/ of a primmers’s teacher, newly promoted to principal, / guiding toddlers on a
bush walk during a storm, / which has suddenly grown very dark and bleak”. One
is not quite sure how much Eggleton is satirising or endorsing Jacinda’s work,
his tone often being jocular in addressing a difficult time. There are
descriptions of deserted town centres once most people are confined indoors. …
and lockdown is announced… “It’s closing time in the gardens of the West; /
lamplights are burning out all over Europe; / and the virus is a riddle wrapped
/ in a mystery inside an enigma, / but we are assured that its code can be
cracked”. (The metaphors are a bit strained here, but the poet has the fun
of mixing together oft-quoted phrases, as he often does.) Easter and Anzac Day are
more-or-less cancelled as people stay at home. “To venture forth for fresh
air, like a witness, / is to see each person englobed in amber, on their own
island, / or else in lockstep with a significant other, / or with
well-exercised dogs; / and ten closer, half turned away, apprehensive, / to
make a wide berth, give you the swerve like a fata morgana…” And it is in
this context that Eggleton declares “A poem is a kind of respirator”
Despite being called PANDEMIC,
the third section is only in part concerned with the literal pandemic. There is
a poem about a rugby match, “Team Spirit,” where Eggleton enjoys playing with copious
alliteration (“rains ravish ravines” etc.). The poem called “Pandemic”
sees Covid as inciting a change in the country’s mood. It incites “Pandemonium.
Pandemonium” and fear and anxiety when “We stay home, we stay quiet in
our lanes, / lit by reflections of approaching flames. / Though clouds of
uncertainty flocculate, / we know that a needle can inoculate.” “Autumn
Almanac” is halfway to being rap – an almost surreal collage of events,
personalities and fears; and similar is “The Tongue Trumpet”. A sequence called
“A Poem for Waitangi Day” is largely satirical about the way the day is
honoured, ending “… let the glacial attitudes of the Pakeha / melt like snow
creatures, or ice crystals, / in the eerie green faery mist / of patupaiarehe,
amid chants of atua; / then bring out the chart of Te Tiriti o Watangi, /
document stained with blood and squid-ink. / A flying canoe ghostly in the sky
paddles / over the whole fished up archipelago, / guided by Kupe, whose
pointing finger / shines with shark oil as the stars rise.” This satire is
followed by others - on such things as
robot-controlled artificial friendships on-line; and radio news with its bogus
urgency. The pandemic triggers many uncertainties.
The next section is a thing unto
itself, a bull-rush through a number of New Zealand’s literary sacred bulls.
The title OLD SCHOOL TIES is deliberately a pun. This is not the old
school ties of poncey schools; but the ties the poet has with old school (or at
any rate older school) writers. The section begins with great affection,
nostalgia and respect for Hone Tuwhare and his habits. But this is followed by
a very rude (and very funny) poem “Dear Reader”, which is a blast at C.K.Stead
who, for his fastidious way of criticising others and in effect belittling
them, is designated as “The drive-by,
take-down guy, with silver hatchets / and bloody scalps stacked in the trophy
cabinet”. “Sargeson Towers” is a panorama of Auckland’s North Shore
bohemianism in the 1950s, with all the poets and scribblers of the time named,
but with A.R.D.Fairburn taking over. In part a work of nostalgia, but perhaps
with a mild undertone of mockery at these old school geezers and at the
restrictions that were in place in the 1950s. “On First Looking Into James K
Baxter’s Collected Letters” reads mainly as contempt for a mood that faded into
inanity in the 1960s. The 1960s were Eggleton’s teenage years, so he gives his
own loose and engaging memories of being a teenager in Auckland in the 1960s
and its now-passe ideas in “Sounds of the Sixties”. “Seven Old Bastards of
Auckland” begins like Baudelaire but becomes a right chastising of the old
booze-and-chunder culture that was still around in the 1960s. And there are
poems about teenage smoking, and war movies they saw as teenagers and memories
of Auckland’s west-coast beaches. To conclude this section there is one of
Eggleton’s “list” poems and one of his master works, “The Great New Zealand
Novel”, a wonderful run through New Zealand novels and types of novels and
pretentiousness in novels and yet coming to a positive conclusion about the
value of New Zealand novels. Very heartening for avid readers.
A very different world is found
in the fifth section THE DEATH OF KAPENE KUKE, where Eggleton moves into
the Pacific and its culture. “The Death of Kapene Kuke” is an anti-colonial
revisionist account of the death of Captain Cook, as “Cook brought capitalism and Adam Smith’s
saws, / rather than reciprocity and sharing of gifts, / and he was not the
great white god Lono, / but one speared through and smoked till flesh seared
off, / as the rain dogs ran with the grey rain gods.” When he moves into
poems about Honolulu, Waikiki and other locations, the poet poised
between lyricism and anger at their degradation. The most poignant poem in this
mode is “Lifting the Island” where idealised views and daydreams of the island
have been washed away; where “The beachcomber who once sailed the seven
seas, / goes from bin to bin with freestyle hands, / grave as a mandarin in
abstract thought. / Ripe stink of garbage …/ He wears nothing but faded and
ripped shorts….. / The old gods are curios, remade in the bar / as the grinning
wooden handles of beer taps.” There is a degree of ambiguity in Eggleton’s
approach in some poems in this section. He is lyrical about the waves and
mountains of the islands and the ways of life that once were. But he is
uneasily aware that he himself is part of the tourist influx and therefore
implicit in the degradation of culture he sees. He is angry about colonialism
and yet is part of the process. This is he honesty of his presentation.
Yet the
next section, WHALE SONG is far more straightforward and lyrical in
describing joyfully the many types of whale that swim and wander in the Pacific–
a pure delight in their diversity. Take for one example “Orcas”, which begins “Hail
to the Orca, carnivore, apex predator. / We are the killer whales from
Antarctica. / We like it cold because then we go fast, / Under the icebergs,
beneath polar winds. / Listen to the icepack grind; listen to gales moan. /
Hail to the orca, carnivore, apex predator….” and continuing into their
habits and lives. There are also poems about the traditional (pre-colonial) connections
of whales with human beings as in the poem “Whale Road” where “The Whales
are wayfinders for our vaka, / the whales are wayfinders for our life raft, /
for our dinghy, for our yacht, for our ferry, for our peace ship, / for our
trawler, for our migrant boat, for our cruise ship, / for our container ship,
for our oil tanker, for our naval ship - / and underneath them all, the holy
holy holy whale swims.” BUT, as the poem “Endangered Ocean Blues” makes
clear, all the varieties of whale are now threatened with extinction. And the
last whale-poem “Whale Psalm” sees the threatened whale as facing destruction
in the same way that human beings are destroying themselves in wars and other
human conflicts. The whale is the calm sanity that human beings require for
their souls’ salvation. These whale poems are straightforward in their limpid
language. Without suggesting they are only for children, I hope that some
enterprising teachers introduce these whale poems to their pupils.
And so to the seventh and final
section THE WALL, which is the most consistently satirical in terms of social issues.
“Deepwater Horizon” has a go at offshore oil-drilling. “The End of History”
mocks Francis Fukuyama’s thesis that, after the fall of the Berlin Wall and
with Communism losing its hold, liberal democracy was the only way forward –
but alas, as all historians know, history never ends, and
Eggleton concludes his poem with “The blow-up globe was punctured and hissed
/ with escaping breath as another dream / began to count down to lift-off; /
and then we were stuck in the 1990s, / with a long night coming on, / and very
few left to sing revolution’s song.”
Do I question some of Eggleton’s prosody? Sometimes. Especially when he
is being satirical, his exuberance runs away with him, and the point of a poem
gets lost (see “The Wall” and especially Gorgon, where his rhymes and word-play become the
whole course of the poem.) On the other hand there are more focused poems like
“My Phone” – an sort of incantation perhaps best read to an audience – which is
a witty smack at those little electronic beasts we now all carry with us. And
the surprising “Ode to Iggy Pop” does bash out some sort of dignity from the
alternative musician, be he “Protested specimen in witness protection, /
he’s a smorgasbord, a feast, torso all jelly, / tongue like a gherkin, eyes
like pickled onion. / Going to see the man known as Iggy Pop, / in a world
where corporates quarry rock, / guitars going for it and drummer’s mighty
hammer, / Iggy revs that tongue to slobber and stammer. / He’s the passenger
who will ride and ride.” “Homage to Fahrenheit 451” is a blast
against the digitisation of books, the removing books from libraries, the
philistinism with regard to books and how the ancient of books are no longer
nurtured. As I’ve already remarked, Eggleton has a proclivity for producing his
own versions of canonical phrases. Thus in “Homage to Fahrenheit 451”,
we get “Books are noble animals but have to be put down, / because about
suffering they are never wrong”. For the record, the final poem in this
collection, “What the Future Holds” is a kind of raising-hands-in-surrender at
the future with a que sera sera what-the-hell vibe. There are only so
many problems that a poet can address. Or ameliorate.
I know. I know. I’ve tracked my
way through Respirator – A Poet Laureate Collection like a bibliographer
dutifully classifying and ticketing the contents. Sorry, but I found no better
way to express my enjoyment at the variety of tones and issues addressed in
David Eggleton’s production. It’s solid, thoughtful, funny, insightful, sombre
and very, very readable. Okay, I carp at Eggleton’s occasional letting his
verbal exuberance run away with him (also known as losing the plot). But what
do you expect? Perfection?
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By pure
chance (no kidding) the next collection of poems to come to my attention was
C.K.Stead’s latest collection Say I Do This – Poems 2018-2022. Now in
his 91st year, Stead has produced 17 collections of poetry in a long
career, as well as a having published a “Collected Poems” (not to mention his many novels, short stories, memoirs and essays). In an end-note he says that he was going to call
this collection Last Poems, in the knowledge that he will not be with us
for much longer; but he changed his mind after recalling a passage from Allen
Curnow that “so long as there’s a next, there’s no last.” So Say I Do
This it became, dedicated to his wife Kay. Stead has a very simple way of
categorising poems in this collection. They are “Home”, poems set in New
Zealand; “Away”, poems built on his time overseas or imaginary places overseas;
and “Friends’, being concerned with people he knows or has known. It is no
irreverence to say these are the poems of a very old man, and his ideas are mainly
based on past experience.
In the Home section, the
opening poem “To be continued perhaps” is a poem of resignation – enjoying
the dying of the light without worrying too much how the world is going on.
“Tohunga Crescent” laments the fact that his across-the-road neighbours, Allen
Curnow and his wife, are no longer around, and the neighbourhood is
degenerating. “Ode to Autumn” tells us that “I lead a life of quiet
medication / longing for foreign shores, adventure and death” and “After
surgery” tells us that “Death will be not unwelcome though I’d hoped / for a
friendlier exit” before he hears the chimes at midnight and babbles o’ green
fields as he recalls childhood memories. His address to his wife “Birthday
Tercets for Kay” speculates among other things on how they will die. Some
neighbourhood poems have a certain degree of soulfulness, such as “To ‘Amnesia,
Muse of Deletions’ ” with its closing line “do the dead forget their friends?”;
or the long memoir “Mary” where a neighbour’s death ends with speculation on
Nature hailing her. “Haiku: Audiology” is about decaying hearing and the sound
illusions such as “cicada / tinnitus making each day / ‘one summer’ ”.
Yes, these are certainly an old man’s poetry, but they are neither self-pitying
nor regretful. Stead shows great interest in, and clearly enjoys, the flora and
fauna around him with a number of poems about the birds in his locality and
their ways. “Pastoral Kaiwaka, 1941”, one of his retro poems apparently rooted
in childhood, is a genuinely witty take on life as was, with a neat dose of
anthropomorphism put to good use.
The great farewell to Home
is “Poem in October”, borrowing one of Dylan Thomas’s titles and changing
Thomas’s opening line “It was my thirtieth year to heaven” to “It was
my ninetieth year to heaven” as he farewells the city and flowers and small
delights and acknowledges that death is commonplace anyway, concluding that he
will say “Kia ora for having me. Stay safe. Go well” as he goes – a
purely banal statement but then maybe death itself is banal. (Personally I
prefer Henry James’ designation of death as “The Distinguished Thing”.)
In the Away section, the
poems about overseas seem more in the nature of distant memories reconstructed
rather than more directly recalled – thus his vignettes of Menton. And many
poems set elsewhere are historical or legendary places which – presumably –
Stead has not stayed in, as in “The Death of Orpheus” about the mythical
demi-god, or “October 16 1817, Angostura
5pm” a tragic anecdote from the era of Simon Bolivar’s wars of liberation.
Likewise the poem “Impromptu: Afghanistan”, which chastises the U.S.A. for creating
pointless chaos in Asia, ending with the statement “America we love you /
(sometimes) but / why so daft, so thick / so unwilling to learn?” Four
“Psalms of Judas” and a poem called “The Challenge”, about the recent burning
of Notre Dame cathedral in Paris, function as proof that Stead is still a
convinced atheist, with much contempt for religion, especially Christianity.
Finally the section called Friends,
which is as much about acquaintances or in some cases anecdotes about once-met
strangers. There are some heartfelt farewells to the dead (“A Sonnet for Peter
Wells”). The poem for Kevin Ireland is a blokey thing remembering the
ingredients of a dinner as taught them by Frank Sargeson. Another poem to Kevin
Ireland gives a more detailed account of their long friendship. The poem to
Fleur Adcock hails her for bringing to Stead’s attention poem-worthy things in
nature. The poem to John Berryman considers Berryman’s suicide, implying that
all things (and people) pass like the animals now becoming extinct. Some poems
require more personal knowledge to fully understand what is being said – that
is, they rely on things that could be decoded only by an in-group. In “A
Sonnet ending on a note of uncertainty”, concerning Seamus Heaney, is Stead
implying that he does not approve of Heaney’s winning the Nobel Prize for
Literature? It seems so. The poem on Keri Hulme is again very questioning, with
Stead (correctly, I think) again raising that matter of violence directed
against children in The Bone People. Iris (an anecdote about Iris
Murdoch) seems light common-room chatter. But there are more deeply felt poems
about the dead or the very old.
There you once again have from me
a description and cataloguing of a collection of poetry rather than a real
critique. What can I say? Say I Do This is Stead as we already know him
– sometimes combative, often ticking off the foolishness of the world, but in
this case being aware that he has already strutted and fretted his hour on the
stage. One thing is very certain – save perhaps for the odd in-joke, Stead
writes clearly, only rarely dealing in ambiguity and never dabbling in wilful
obscurity. From that perspective, this is a very rewarding collection.
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Turning
from the work of two very experienced and older poets, I come to the debut
collection of a younger poet. Leah Dodd has hitherto appeared only in smaller
poetry publications. Her style is very free verse and most of her poems are
presented in loose fragments scattered randomly across the page. Sometimes it
is hard to see the reason for the separation of words in this way. Most titles are
presented in lower case and one of two poems
are unpunctuated stream-of-consciousness, as in the poem “spawning season”. Some
poems begin with an idea but then wander off in other directions like a stream
getting lost, as in “ilovekeats69”.
And that, I promise, is the end
of my dyspeptic grumbles because I quickly discovered that Leah Dodd is a very
astute observer of the scene, witty -
sometimes hilarious – and not falling into traps of self-pity. Sure, there are
poems about break-ups, but the poem “summer” suggests a kind of taking-it-on-the-chin
when a breakup has happened. Other poems imply a desire for a partner, but they
are treated with irony and in terms of fantasy, as in “the only way out of my student loan is to
marry ex-FRIENDS star Matthew Perry” where, in her dreams, she is considering dating
a Hollywood star after a breakup. Similarly, and equally ironically “marry me
(on Runescape)” is also a fantasy about hooking up with someone. Even more irony
dominates “Tips for lockdown wellness”, seeking a fantasy protective figure but
in this case a tiger! Irony is one of Dodd’s main weapons even outside breakup
situations, as when the poem “revolution” proposes that bats should replace
people for our own good
Sometimes Dodd, a young woman,
easily recalls childhood or teenage situations, as in “Mt Eden 2005”, concerned
with painful ways of removing pimples. “When you want to be a mermaid so bad it
hurts” perhaps (but only perhaps) suggests that a young girl’s daydreams cannot
ever really by fulfilled. And “masterclass” is the mixed memories of learning
the piano. (The blurb tells me that Leah Dodd is a classically-trained pianist,
though an end-note says that this poem is also inspired by Pink Floyd.) “Memphis
Belle” is a memoir of being billeted in a less-then-desirable motel while
taking part in a high school Shakespeare fest; and “guided hypnosis” is cooling off after a party.
An almost surreal poem “I am the
ghost of the IKEA futon couch” is an anthropomorphic account of furniture
becoming a box of memories – probably the most fully imaginative of Dodd’s
poems in this collection. Dodd touches on conservation and the environment in “0800
SEE ORCA” lamenting the orca’s death, but conservation is not one of her major
concerns. Observing the local scene is. Scattered through this collection there
are four “bus poems”, which are literally about riding on the bus in parts of
Wellington but which involve daydreams, reveries and memories during the ride
Which brings me to the most
poignant of her poems - and the least ironical. The poem “clot” appears to be a
poem about an early miscarriage. But one of her best poems, “tether”, about
looking after a baby, understands both how difficult it is and yet how
compelling: “he’ll cry if I leave.
Little limpet / but oh, I love the closeness. It slips / so quickly once we were connected / by a vein and two
arteries ever since / we drift. I take these gifts with grace”. “clucky” is also about baby. It is implied in
“muscle memory” that she is raising the child alone. And in “gig people” about
behaviour of crowd at rock concert “we joke about the baby being home on his
own / to three different people”. (I hope she really was joking.) “Last
Call Nigel” observes the baby developing into toddler-hood. And in “stone fruit”
“he is laid down, tucked in, / his lamp switched off / and curtains drawn to
block / morning light / and he sleeps ? little prince, / the one who wasn’t
planned / but wasn’t unexpected.”
The nature of society and trends
are examined. “Patched gang members in the Maori Affairs Committee Room, 1979” is
really a poem about the disjunction of Maori
street culture and highbrow Pakeha culture with lines like “the council
blasts Debussy / and Mozart loud / outside the library / where brown kids
linger / and drink and fight / like white culture down the throat.” “West
Coast School of Rock”, opens “It was a time of Empire Records and The
Runaways / black miniskirts and steel-capped boots / gigs at an emptied
warehouse / where kids learnt riffs and / soaked their black tees with sweat”. It
reads like reportage with punchlines suggesting a self-destructive fad. Is
the style intended to be deadpan? I leave you to judge.
And so to what will be the piece
de resistance for many readers. This is the outrageously funny “the things
I would do for a Pizza Hut Classic Cheese right now”, with a list of all the
most barmy suggestions of what she would do. Food turns up in a number of her poems,
“cow fund” being a fantasia about raising a cow to be able to produce expensive
cheese. But “the things I would do for a Pizza Hut Classic Cheese right now”
tops all the others.
A short
judgement? This is a fully formed collection from a poet who has a keen eye and
an engaging style. One of the year’s best.