Not
everything worth reading is hot off the press. In this section,
Nicholas Reid recommends "something old" that is still well worth
reading. "Something old" can mean anything from a venerable and antique
classic to a good book first published five or more years ago.
“OUR
MUTUAL FRIEND” by Charles Dickens (first published as a serial 1864-65 and then
in book form 1865)
Three
years ago I gave a public lecture to mark the 200th birthday of
Charles Dickens, and in preparing it I looked up statistics on how popular each
of his novels was, in terms of sales and printings. To my surprise, I found
that his biggest seller, calculating from all the copies printed since it was
first published, was A Tale of Two
Cities, which has never exactly been my favourite. I also found out which
of his novels has been most frequently filmed or televised (A Christmas Carol, often presented with
the title Scrooge) and which has been
least often filmed (Barnaby Rudge,
of which no film has been made since the days of silent cinema). Given that Great Expectations and Bleak
House are, for the literati, Dickens’ greatest novels; and given that David Copperfield and Oliver Twist are probably the ones most
often discussed by the “common reader”, all this surprised me.
One fact does
not surprise me, however. Our Mutual
Friend (four times turned into television serials, but never filmed for the
cinema) has never really caught on with the general reader. This was Dickens’
last completed novel, written after his masterpiece Great Expectations, and before Edwin
Drood, which remained unfinished at the time of his death in 1870.
Looking again at
this long and rambling novel, I remain amazed that Dickens could write so well
and forcefully, and yet produce something that doesn’t reach his own highest
standards. For me Our Mutual Friend, even
with all its incidental good things, is almost a case study of how even a great
writer can go wrong.
Its
unsatisfactory story has three interlocking major plots, which go thus:
The wealthy John
Harmon has drowned in the Thames, and his fortune has gone to the “golden dustman” Mr “Noddy” Boffin and
his wife, who are simple, altruistic and generous people. Mr Boffin employs
villainous, one-legged Silas Wegg (“the
evil genius of the House of Boffin”) to read to him and otherwise amuse
him. But sudden wealth goes to Mr Boffin’s head. He becomes selfish, morose and
miserly. Unknown to him, the villainous Wegg discovers an alternative will of
the late John Harmon, which would disinherit and ruin Boffin if it were made public.
With a certain Mr Venus, Wegg plans to blackmail Boffin with this alternative
will.
BUT, in the
second strand of plot, and as we discover definitively about halfway through
the novel (it has been broadly hinted at before this), John Harmon is not
really dead. He chose to be thought so when a man of similar appearance drowned
in the Thames. Under the assumed name “John Rokesmith”, Harmon has taken
employment as a secretary to Mr Boffin (who has not seen him since he was a
child and who therefore doesn’t recognise his benefactor). “Rokesmith’s”
intention is to test the feelings of Boffin’s ward, the beautiful Bella Wilfer
– whom his father insisted he marry as a condition of his will – to see if she
will really love him, apparently a lowly employee, for his own sake rather than
as a man of considerable wealth. At first Bella Wilfer is disdainful of him.
The climactic moment comes when Boffin, urged on by Wegg, denounces “Rokesmith”
as a fortune hunter, seeking only the wealth that will one day be Bella’s. At
this point Bella is morally “saved” when she realizes she really does love
“Rokesmith” for himself. She renounces wealth and chooses, for love’s sake, to
live in straitened circumstances by eloping with “Rokesmith” and marrying him.
These two
strands of plot do connect, but the third strand of plot is really a separable
story. It concerns Lizzie Hexam, the daughter of the raffish and semi-criminal
“Gaffer” Hexam, who makes his living by salvaging things from the river. It was
Gaffer who found “Harmon’s” body in the Thames. Two men have their amorous eyes
on Lizzie Hexam. One is the lawyer Eugene Wrayburn. The other is the jealous
schoolmaster Bradley Headstone. After various complications (I’ll skip them, if
you don’t mind), Bradley Headstone tries – unsuccessfully – to murder Eugene
Wrayburn in such a way that it will look as if the criminal Rogue Riderhood was
responsible. When this plan misfires, Riderhood turns on Headstone, and the two
villainous men die, locked in each other’s arms, as they sink to the bottom of
the canal where one has attempted to drown the other. (Drowning occurs in more
than one novel by Dickens – Quilp dies thus in The Old Curiosity Shop,
as do Compeyson and [more-or-less] Magwitch in Great Expectations and Steerforth in David Copperfield.)
So to the
resolution of all three strands of the plot. Wegg at last makes his move
against Boffin, but it is a damp squib. By this stage “Rokesmith” (Harmon) is
fully satisfied with Bella’s virtue as a wife and the mother of their small
baby. It turns out that the Boffins knew all along who “Rokesmith” was and they
merely pretended to be mean, miserly
and scornful to further test Bella’s moral virtue against the temptations of
money. Wegg’s plots fall through when his alternative will proves useless. SO –
Wegg retires cursing. John Harmon and Bella are now happily married and have a
fortune, as do the nice Boffins. The lawyer Eugene Wrayburn marries Lizzie
Hexam. And Rogue Riderhood, Bradley Headstone and Gaffer Hexam are all
conveniently dead.
And looking at this
summary, accurate though it is, I realize that I have done what one often does
when attempting to précis long, serially-written Victorian novels (like, for
example, Thackeray’s The Newcomes). I have left out some
of the novel’s most interesting characters because they are not necessary to
the central plots. In Our Mutual Friend
there is in effect a fourth plotline, poorly integrated with the rest,
concerning the extortionate money-lender “Fascination” Fledgeby, ruining high
society figures. It is through Fledgeby that we are introduced to the
Veneerings, whom Dickens satirises something rotten as the type of snobbish,
social-climbing parvenus; and to the self-satisfied, narrow-minded, middle-class
Mr Podsnap, who makes snap judgments about everything. The only conscientious
and sympathetic person we encounter in the more affluent classes is Mr Tremlow.
The Fledgeby plot also introduces us to Riah, a gentle and generous Jewish
money-lender (whom, after complaints from Jewish friends about the villainous
Fagin in Oliver Twist, Dickens
deliberately created to be a sympathetic Jewish character.) There is also the
pathetic “Jenny Wren” who looks after her drunken father as if he were a
dependent naughty child.
Plot
summaries – even ones as extensive as you have just read – are of course no way
to judge the worth of a novel. Nearly all Dickens’ novels have a large cast,
complex plots and subplots, and characters who are introduced elaborately only to
vanish without advancing the story in any way. All of these things are found in
Our Mutual Friend, and because they
are of themselves part of the Dickens phenomenon, they are not the reason I
call this almost a case study in how a great writer can go wrong.
What
does strike me in this novel is how there are so many false starts – so many
interesting paths that are not pursued. Many scholars have strained to show
that Dickens did plan his novels in advance, and did not merely improvise his
plots as he went along, from serial-number to serial-number. Even if this is true,
however, there is far too much evidence of things introduced into Our Mutual Friend merely for momentary
sentimental effect. I think of the gratuitous introduction of “Little John”,
whom the generous Boffins adopt. Within three chapters of entering the novel,
he dies pathetically, which seems to be his sole purpose for being in the novel
in the first place. He is merely a device to produce a pleasant maudlin feeling
in susceptible readers. Or I think of
the character of Betty Higden, similarly introduced for a quickly-ensuing
death, so that Dickens has a platform from which to denounce the Poor Laws.
(Betty Higden, incidentally, is the mother of “Sloppy” who “does the police in different voices” –
the phrase that so interested T.S.Eliot).
All the time I
was re-reading Our Mutual Friend, I
was mentally comparing it with the great – and far more tightly-structured –
novel which preceded it in the Dickens canon, Great Expectations. Clearly Dickens’ interests and thematic
concerns in Our Mutual Friend are similar
to those in the greater novel. There is again the presence of the river. There
is again a mysterious and unrevealed benefactor working by stealth (Harmon to
the Boffins here; Magwitch to Pip there). There is again Dickens’ rejecting the
notion of class distinctions as determinants of moral character. Late in Our Mutual Friend, high society sneers
at the middle-class lawyer Eugene Wrayburn’s marrying the low-born Lizzie
Hexam. The sympathetic Tremlow steps in to defend the idea of a gentleman as
one who does what is morally right rather than as one possessing wealth – which
is very much the lesson Pip learns in Great
Expectations. Bella Wilfer (the ward of the wealthy Boffins) is very much
like a more benign version of Estella (the ward of the wealthy Miss Havisham),
but with a touch of patient Griselda thrown in. She has been brought into high
society but, unlike Estella, she is not corrupted by it. (Biographers now all
note that Estella and Bella, with their similar names, are both in some sense
portraits of Ellen Ternan, the young actress who was Dickens’ mistress at this
time.)
So comparisons
can be drawn between a very great novel and this one, but there is still a
major problem that places Our Mutual
Friend in a lower rank. It is the screeching illogic of its development.
Coincidences (the fortuitous linking of the destinies of otherwise unconnected
characters…) are one thing. They work handsomely enough in Great Expectations (Pip just happens to be sent to play with the
little girl who just happens to be the daughter of the convict he helped….).
But then Great Expectations is told
in the first person, and its surprise revelations are credible in that they are
filtered through the limited consciousness of Pip. In Our Mutual Friend, by contrast, Dickens’ omniscient third-person
narration seems merely to be withholding things from us wilfully.
He cheats
blatantly.
Cheerful,
altruistic Mr Boffin’s sudden transformation into a nasty and carping miser is
too abrupt for belief. But then, it is much later explained, he was only playing at this role in order to
test Bella and others; and he already knew the truth about Wegg and Harmon. Not
very satisfactory dramatically, but at least it has some sort of logic. Unfortunately, it also makes
complete nonsense of the scenes in which we have been led to believe that he
was quaking in fear at the hold Wegg supposedly had over him. In retrospect,
they are a cheap conjuring trick – neither believable nor dramatic as
psychological development. (Apparently G.K.Chesterton argued that Dickens
originally intended Boffin to be genuinely corrupted by his inherited
wealth and to find redemption slowly; but the pressures of serial writing
forced Dickens to improvise the existing plot. Alas! We have to judge the book
that was actually written – not the one that might have been projected.)
In addition, the
revelation of “Rokesmith’s” identity about halfway through the novel deprives
Wegg’s schemes of any real suspense. We know in advance that they will be
defeated.
It was sometime
in the mid-twentieth century that literary critics began to interpret Dickens
as a great imaginative “poet”, whose works had to be read in terms of dominant
symbolism. So Bleak House was read in
terms of its great opening image of fog, symbolic of the obfuscations and delay
of the law about which the plot turns. And Little
Dorrit was read in terms of its central image of the debtors’ prison,
paradigm of an imprisoning society. Similarly, Our Mutual Friend could be read symbolically in terms of its
opening scene set on the river. It is a great opening scene, one of the best
Dickens wrote, with Lizzie Hexam and her father Gaffer rowing on a darkening
evening between Southwark Bridge and London Bridge. It is tempting to see this
as some sort of image of the river of life and the strange (or unsavoury)
things that it throws up. This image is so potent that I have noticed a twilit
or moonlit river scene often features on the cover of recent paperback editions
of the novel.
Now there
certainly are symbolic images in this novel – Boffin’s “dust”-heaps (“dust”
being a Victorian euphemism for rubbish, mud and filth of all sorts),
connecting wealth with sordor; the “Harmony Jail” of John Harmon’s father,
suggesting the imprisoning nature of wealth; and the river. But the actual
experience of reading the novel is quite different from a matter of pursuing
poetic images, whatever their intention may be. We are caught up in the
plot-spinning of an absurd plot. We are presented with characters who are
stand-alone shafts of acute social satire for the few pages they inhabit (the
Veneerings; Podsnap; Lizzie’s brother Charley Hexam), but who are not fully
integrated into the story. And we are faced
with psychological untruths – the absurd transformations of Boffin and the sickly
image of Bella Wilfer’s married bliss.
In the end, Our Mutual Friend seems to me a novel
that lacks the gusto of the early Dickens and the psychological truth
Now, gentle
reader, you may be wondering why I have been so hard on this novel, which is
esteemed highly in some quarters. The answer is
- disappointment. Of all the women characters whom Dickens created,
Lizzie Hexam seems to me the most attractive – a strong-willed young woman who
is able to defy her criminal father over the way he makes a living, and who clearly
makes her own plans. Dickens finally gives her wedding bells as a reward, which
might offend some modern women readers; but at least he shows a middle-class
character fully allying himself with this working-class woman. I am aware that
this character has been criticised as being improbable and superficially-drawn.
We never get to hear Lizzie Hexam’s thoughts. She is seen from the outside
only. She speaks in standard English rather than the demotic tongue she might
be expected to speak after growing up in the lower depths. She develops at the
whim of the plot. But when all this is said, she is still a hardy young woman
with a will and a brain and admirable physical strength.
It therefore
disappoints me that this fine and spirited character does not inhabit a better
novel. Draw a rough comparison – it’s like the delightful Beatrice and Benedick
inhabiting one of Shakespeare’s less accomplished comedies.
Our Mutual Friend is not worthy of Lizzie Hexam.
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