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Monday, October 21, 2019

Something Old


Not everything worth reading is hot off the press. In this section, we recommend "something old" that is still well worth reading. "Something Old" can mean anything from a venerable and antique classic to a good book first published four or more years ago.

“WISE BLOOD” by Flannery O’Connor (first published 1952); “THE VIOLENT BEAR IT AWAY” by Flannery O’Connor (first published 1960)



            Some weeks back on this blog, looking at Cormac McCarthy’s Suttree, I referred briefly to other writers of the American South who, like McCarthy, have or had some sort of religious preoccupation. Chief among them was Flannery O’Connor (1925-1964), whose two novels Wise Blood and The Violent Bear It Away are drenched in the fervor and wildness of the South’s poor white Protestants (as are many of her short stories for which, among many readers, she is better-known) . Having made this mention, I spent some evenings re-reading O’Connor’s work and once again tasting that strange mixture of sordor and religious fervor.

            Wise Blood, first published in 1952, is the better known of the two novels. In passing only, I note it was made into a very good film by John Huston in 1979, unusual among literary adaptations in that it stuck very closely to the original novel.

Wise Blood is essentially a very simple fable. A man spends his life trying to run away from something, but ends up embracing it. More specifically, a man who spends his life cursing and denying God is finally overwhelmed by God. This is a “hound of heaven” fable.

Having its genesis in a number of separate short-stories O’Connor had written, Wise Blood, though a very short work, is very episodic. Implicitly set just after the Second World War, the novel concerns Hazel Motes, a discharged and embittered serviceman. We are early made aware that, grandson of a fire-and-brimstone preacher, he had a very hard childhood, frequently being chastised and beaten, constantly being told he should be grateful for being redeemed in the Blood of Jesus, and constantly resenting the fact. Finding his post-war home abandoned and his family gone, he heads for a (fictitous) Southern city on a personal mission of enlightenment. He aims to condemn religion as he knows it. But, being Bible-bred and in the South, the only religion he knows is That Old Time Religion. So it is as a “prophet” that he condemns Jesus, on street corners and usually mounted on the bonnet of the broken-down old car he has bought.

Hazel Motes is not an articulate or well-educated man. We piece together his anti-religious creed from statements scattered through the novel. When in the army, he was jeered by soldiers who told him he had no soul; and he “took a long time to believe them because he wanted to believe them. All he wanted was to believe them and get rid of it once and for all, and he saw the opportunity here to get rid of it without corruption, to be converted to nothing instead of to evil.” (Chapter 1) The burden of sin weighs so heavily on him that he wants to get rid of it and of any notion of the soul. He wants his world-view to be completely materialist. He believes the idea of sin simply corrupts people, and in one argument he declares “there’s no person a whoremonger who wasn’t something worse first. That’s not the sin, not blasphemy. The sin came before them.” (Chapter 4) In other words, he rejects the notions of Original Sin and of a primal flaw in human beings even while acknowledging them. Speaking of sin simply corrupts people. And if sin doesn’t exist, there’s no need for redemption. The notion of sin itself makes us feel dirty.  “I AM clean. If Jesus existed, I wouldn’t be clean.” (Chapter 5) Also “Jesus is a trick on niggers” (Chapter 4), as religion is only for the gullible. So he tells the crowd on street corners “I preach the Church Without Christ. I’m member and preacher to that church where the blind don’t see and the lame don’t walk and what’s dead stays that way. Ask me about that church and I’ll tell you it’s the church that the blood of Jesus don’t foul with redemption.” (Chapter 6)

Even to corral together these statements is to make this impulsive, bitter and very determined Hazel Motes sound more rational and articulate than he is. Remember, the Bible seems to be the only book he has ever read, and though he denies it, it is the “blood” (i.e. inspiration, impulse, fervor) that drives him. The novel has him developing not by reasoning with others, but in separate interactions with people. You can see how it began as separate short stories.

Hazel wants to violate the codes he was brought up in. He wants to sin as much as he can, and he begins by cohabiting with a prostitute (Mrs Leora Watts) and soaking himself in sex. But, implicitly, this is to accept the very category of sin that he denies. He wants to argue with a blind and disfigured preacher called Asa Hawks, who “blinded himself for Jesus”, but he finds himself more involved with the preacher’s daughter Sabbath Lily Hawks, a scrawny teenager who is hungry for sex and wants to seduce him – and if he is at all attracted to her it is only because he wants to violate her virginity, another blow against the notion of sinfulness. He is sometimes pursued and pestered by a naïve, randy18-year-old called Enoch Emery, who is desperate for friendship and easily latches on to Hazel’s notion of there being nothing but materiality. Indeed, Enoch tries to prove the point to Hazel by gifting him a shrunken human body he has stolen from a museum – a body without a soul. (Another point made in passing – though the novels are very different, Hazel’s connection with naïve 18-year-old Enoch is very like Suttree’s connection with naïve 18-year-old Gene Harrogate in Suttree, and I can’t help feeling that Cormac McCarthy must have read Wise Blood at some time.)

As I read Wise Blood, I often feel I am marching through a minefield of symbols. I could tabulate some of them facilely thus:

Hazel wears a black hat which makes people repeatedly assume that he is a conventional preacher. This points to the fact that he cannot run away from his connection with the religion he denies. Hazel puts a lot of faith in a broken-down, unreliable second-hand car he has bought, and at one stage says that a man with a good car doesn’t need redemption. This suggests a shallow faith in technology and “progress” and their insufficiency as a substitute for religious belief. The shrunken human body Enoch brings to Hazel (and a separate episode concerning a fake ape) suggest what a human being without a soul would look like – merely a material thing. There’s the possibility that Hazel Motes’ name has symbolic significance. He walks in a “haze” of doubt or despair; and he could be one who, as the New Testament says, sees the “mote” in somebody else’s eyes while missing the “beam” in his own. As for the bright white cloud that hangs over Hazel and Sabbath Lily Hawks when she strives to seduce him, and the “tiny point of light” into which Hazel is transformed in the very last sentence of the novel – they are so pregnant with meaning that you can give each a couple of dozen symbolic interpretations.

In the midst of all this, though, Hazel Motes is obsessed, but is also distinguished by his integrity. He is trying to spread the truth as he understands it. His articulated creed is a totally materialist and empirical view of life, a soulless life, but he is honest enough with himself to know that this means “nothing” – nihilism – and a life without meaning. He is not a saint. Indeed (I will not go into the plot details) he becomes a murderer. But he has integrity. He is genuinely outraged by those who pretend to be what they are not – in other words, those who violate the idea of truth. He himself wants something absolute, concrete and clearly-defined. He is disgusted that the blind preacher Asa Hawks refuses to debate with him. In fact he taunts Hawks by saying that if Hawks were a real preacher he would try to convert him. His contempt grows when he discovers Asa Hawks is a fake anyway. Perhaps worse, there is the huckster Onnie Jay Holy, who presumes to offer Hazel tips on how to draw the crowds and who advises “If you want to get anywhere in religion, you got to keep it sweet.” (Chapter 9) Onnie Jay Holy sets up his own fake mission on the streets, rejoicing in the amount of money he is able to make. This is the temptation of commercialised religion, forebear of televangelists and other such horrors. It disgusts Hazel even more than real religion does because it is so obviously hypocritical – things said by people who don’t really believe them.

Where does all this lead in the arc of the story? Through various disillusionments with his own rebellious creed, it leads Hazel back to the very things he set out to reject. Mortification of the flesh (in the most extreme ways); a quiet and contemplative life which absolutely rejects materialism; an awareness that his life is not his own and is guided by something much bigger than himself; and, of course, to inevitable death.

Have I destroyed this novel for you by so neatly slicing-and-dicing its main ideas? I hope not. It was only when I read the novel’s last chapter (about Hazel’s dealing with his last landlady Mrs Flood) that I saw all the strands of its story being pulled together and a clear pattern emerging. For after my philosophical and religious breakdown of it, its chief effect as you actually read it is of the oddness of it; the Southernness of it; the bizarre, eccentric strangeness of it. In that respect it is “Southern Gothic”.

But for those who don’t see its religious pattern, the story is merely about a psychopathic, self-destructive loner. Years back, coming out of a Film Festival screening of John Huston’s very good film of the novel, I heard one viewer’s intepretation of it as being “just about a psycho.” Yes, you could see it as that if you interpret Hazel Motes as a psychiatric “case”. But it would be to miss the whole point that Flannery O’Connor was making.



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In 1960, just a few years before her premature death from a congenital disease,

 there appeared Flannery O’Connor’s second, and last, novel The Violent Bear It Away. The geographical setting and the theological issues are simlar to those of Wise Blood, but the focus is quite different. While Wise Blood concerns a man trying fruitlessly to run away from God, The Violent Bear It Away stages a clash between fanatical religion and insufficient secularism – a clash resolved only by the grace of God.

As an infant, Francis Marion Tarwater (known simply as Tarwater in most of the novel) has been kidnapped by his crazed and fanatical great-uncle Mason Tarwater, a preacher and “prophet” who has spent time in a psychiatric hospital. They live in an an isolated shack in the backblocks, where Mason keeps Tarwater from any formal schooling, trains him to be a “prophet”, and tells him that his mission is to baptise the mentally-retarded son of his cousin, the heathen (i.e. agnostic) schoolteacher Rayber.  Like Hazel Motes in Wise Blood, Tarwater comes to hate the religion in which he has been raised, and sees its promised rewards as a paltry thing:

 “In the darkest, most private part of his soul, hanging upsidedown like a sleeping bat, was the certain undeniable knowledge that he was not hungry for the bread of life. Had the bush flamed for Moses, the sun stood still for Joshua, the lions turned aside before Daniel only to prophesy the bread of life? Jesus? He felt a terrible disappointment in that conclusion, a dread that it was true.” (Chapter 1)

And yet unschooled Tarwater is still saturated in that religion. Its hopes and fears are the only categories in which he can think, even as he rationally rejects them.

Tarwater is only fourteen years old when Mason dies. After disposing of his great-uncle’s corpse in a most un-Christian way, Tarwater heads out of the backblocks and into the city, looking to live with Rayber who is the only relative he knows. And here begins the novel’s battle of wills. Tarwater spits and blasphemes against the fundamentalist religion he has been taught, and Rayber clearly thinks he will be a good specimen for “conversion” to his own secular humanism. But Tarwater resists Rayber’s teachings as just another form of indoctrination which, the author implies, they really are. More bafflingly for Rayber, he himself sometimes feels the pull of religion – as in a scene where he finds himself at a pentecostal gathering, is rationally disgusted by the spectacle of a child having been trained to preach, and yet is drawn into what she preaches anyway.

Rayber’s assumption is that his calm reason will easily win over Tarwater, but Tarwater, 14-years-old, inarticulate and only semi-literate, intuits much that is wrong with Rayber’s views and is able to bat them away with uncouth but pithy arguments of his own.

The real catalyst in the novel is Rayber’s mentally-retarded son Bishop. To the utilitarian rationalist Rayber, Bishop serves no purpose. His logic says that the afflicted boy is just a thing, incapable of rational thought and therefore not really human. Indeed he is a disposable thing. Tarwater also resents Bishop because he has been given the “mission” of baptising him, which he refuses to do. Yet every time the adult Rayber and the adolescent Tarwater fiercely despise Bishop, they are thwarted by a totally irrational sense of responsbility and love. This violates Rayber’s anti-religious code of strict rationality: “If , without thinking, he lent himself to it, he would feel suddenly a morbid surge of the love that terrified him – powerful enough to throw him to the ground in an act of idiot praise. It was completely irrational and abnormal.” (Chapter 4)

What Flannery O’Connor is dramatising is the irrational inbreaking of God’s grace. You are held in the hand of God whether you like it or not. The more you kick and protest, like an angry adolescent rebelling against a parent, the more firmly you are held. This has repercussions in what eventually happens with Tarwater’s “mission” to baptise the boy, and with Tarwater himself when his time with Rayber is over.

All brief synopses tidy up and simplify what a good novel is about. This is what I have done here. Once again, as with Wise Blood, this novel presents us with an impoverished and underdeveloped South, where the white characters routinely refer to blacks as “niggers” and where That Old Time Religion has a fearful hold. There are also moments of physical violence – old Mason Tarwater shoots at the welfare people who have come to get the boy he has kidnapped; there are two attempts in the novel to kill a child; and there is an (implied) rape.

Only one part of this novel originally appeared as a short story. Perhaps because of this genesis, The Violent Bear It Away seems to me a far more “finished” novel than Wise Blood. It certainly has a less episodic and more focused plot; one that winds back upon itself so that Flannery O’Connor can introduce anterior events credibly in characters’ thoughts. Like Wise Blood, it does expect readers to pick up its symbols, but there are not as many of them as there are in the earlier novel. In this case, we note that the rationalist Rayber wears a hearing aid, which he can turn off to total silence – which is what he does whenever the word of God challenges him (maybe an analogue for the “invincible ignorance” that Saint Paul mentioned). The voice that speaks in Tarwater’s mind could be the voice of secular rationalism – or of the Devil. Along with all the watery references to baptism, there is also a literal burning bush in the novel’s conclusion.

We have to wrestle with the novel’s title. Its epigraph is “From the days of John the Baptist until now, the Kingdom of Heaven suffereth violence and the violent bear it away.” This is a quotation from the Gospel of Matthew (Matt. 11:12) as rendered in the old Douay (Catholic) translation of the Bible. Among other things, this points to one very obvious fact which will probably already be known to most readers of this blog. Though writing about the Protestant fundamentalists who surrounded her, the Southerner Flannery O’Connor was, lifelong, a devout Catholic, and her tales take extreme forms of Protestant fundamentalism and interpret them in very Catholic ways, especially in the way grace is handled. As for the epigraph itself, it could be interpreted in many ways. Personally, I read it as saying that the “violent” are those who would wish to destroy the kingdom of God, and they are equally religious fanatics who distort the Christian message, and rational secularists who try to suppress the religious impulse even while feeling its reality.

As I said at the head of this review, Flannery O’Connor is better known by some readers for her short stories rather than for her two novels. They appear in two collections, A Good Man is Hard to Find and Everything That Rises Must Converge, which were posthumously gathered together as her Collected Stories, together with some stories she had discarded because she had already woven them into her novels. Now that I am renewing my acquaintance with her work, I may deal with her short stories in a later blog posting.

Something Thoughtful


Nicholas Reid reflects in essay form on general matters and ideas related to literature, history, popular culture and the arts, or just life in general. You are free to agree or disagree with him.

SHOULD INFORMATION BE AVAILABLE TO ALL?



I recently watched on Netflix the very good American series Unbelievable, which was “inspired by true events” according to its publicity. That claim often disguises complete fictions, but in this case it appears to have been true. Though the names of characters were changed, the series seems to have followed real events quite closely. Briefly, a young woman claimed to have been raped, but as there was no physical evidence to corroborate her claim, the police who interrogated her, bullied her into signing a statement retracting her claim and saying she had made her story up. Understandably, the series focused on the young woman’s angst; but it also focused on two women detectives who recognised that the circumstances of the rape were very similar to other cases they had come across. A clever criminal had found ways of leaving no trace behind whenever he raped a woman.

How did he learn how to do this?

This is what made me write this posting’s think-piece.

Early in the series, a group of police complained about how hard it was to find clues at the scene of a crime in an age when everybody watches TV series such as CSI, and therefore everybody is informed about the way clumsy criminals can leave traces of their DNA. (As a side issue, I note that, as a lawyer once complained, there are now juries who ignore very good circumstantial evidence and assume that defendants can be convicted only if there’s DNA evidence – but that takes me a little off my theme.)

            If such information is available to criminals, they can learn just what not to do, in order to escape detection. In the true story behind Unbelievable, the serial rapist had got hold of a police manual on how to examine rape scenes – so he knew what to avoid doing. He never forced an entry into the residences of his victims. He always wore a mask and gloves, so that his victims could not identify him. He always wore a condom as he committed rape and he always made his victims shower for twenty minutes before he left – so that he would leave not the least trace of his DNA on their bodies. Information had been put to an evil purpose.

            Not too long ago, there was a great push to have all official information made public. Among those who didn’t consider the matter too closely, there was the idea that the secrets of governments were merely a way of controlling the population; that there could be no good reason to hide diplomatic cables from general view; and that the world would be a better place if all information – technical, forensic, military, diplomatic, economic – were made available to the general public.

This was the (brief) period in which the likes of Julian Assange and Edward Snowden were being held up as heroes.

But only gradually did it dawn on the wiser ones that if all information were freely available, much of it could be used by people of ill intent.

Seven years ago on this blog, I reviewed Nick Cohen’s polemic You Can’t Read This Book. It was mainly a long argument against censorship. But when he came to the matter of government censorship, Cohen changed gears. Cannibalising my own review here, I noted that Cohen presented a “critique of the idealistic notion that the Internet can circumvent state censorship by making all information freely available. The reality is that supporters of dictatorship and repression can use the Internet as well as democrats. Did you really think that only nice liberals, who want to improve the world, can read the 20,000-plus stolen American State Department cables that Julian Assange and Wikileaks made public? Secret policemen read them too. Cohen argues that Assange’s chosen representative in Belarus was a supporter of that country’s dictatorship. He promptly alerted the secret police to all the names of Belarus dissidents who were referred to in the cables which Assange had forwarded him. Whereupon the secret police drew up death lists to deal with them. Thanks Wikileaks!

This is really the rape case writ large - information used by people for immoral and inhumane purposes. There certainly is a case for freedom of information in democratic societies, but don’t imagine that it will always be used for the betterment of humanity.


Monday, October 7, 2019

Something New


We feature each fortnight Nicholas Reid's reviews and comments on new and recent books.

“LOST AND SOMEWHERE ELSE” by Jenny Bornholdt (Victoria University Press, $NZ25); “DEADPAN” by James Norcliffe (Otago University Press, $NZ27:50); “MOTH HOUR” by Anne Kennedy (Auckland University Press, $NZ 24:99)



I am going to approach Jenny Bornholdt’s latest collection of poems Lost and Somewhere Else as if I have never heard of this prolific and much-honoured poet. I will attempt the radical technique of reading the poems on the page themselves, and ignoring biographical details - save to note that (according to the acknowledgements) the poems were written when the poet and her husband were living for a year (2018) in an Ernst Plischke-designed house in Central Otago. This may have some bearing on the poems, which is the only reason I mention it, and it is specifically referenced in the poem “Crossing”.

This collection begins in a deceptively simple way. The opening poems concern standing in the sunlight at the back door and looking at clothes on the line; the sight of backyard birds and how the disposition of light recalls childhood; the lino in the kitchen and that part of the lawn that has been mown. But these are not simply descriptive pieces. Something is moving behind them, and that is an implied attitude to life itself. When we shift to the poem “Becoming Girl”, seemingly based on a childhood anecdote, we are wrestling with what the poet considers the process of becoming a woman, or at least the process of being seen as one. Later poems like “Geology” and “Blossom” use gardening imagery, but clearly situate it as a metaphor for life. The same is true of the poem “Flight”, only ostensibly about aircraft. There are many references to weather as we clearly move through “Winter” and “Wintersweet”, some elegaic poems towards the end of the volume and a touch of confessionalism in “Crossing” in which (possibly) the poet herself is the woman who “nearing sixty… loves her husband ferociously.” Every so often, Bornholdt gives herself to epigrams and haiku.

But all this is only to tell you in a po-faced way about the book’s contents, and not in any way to evaluate them.

I admit to finding some poems cryptic and hard to understand, as if I am not “in the know” about personal things that are alluded to. This is especially true of the poem “Finance”, which still baffles me after repeated readings. Is it possibly about growing older and separating the adult from the child? This could be suggested by the lines “Was this the end / of the world? Of Childhood? / This frozenness trapping us / in our adult selves.”   Or is it about the constraints of finance, as the last lines imply? Perhaps it simply asks too much of the reader. Yet immediately following it, there are two perfectly clear vignettes in “Last Summer”, with its imagery of a beach,  death, darkness and the daunting moon; and even clearer variations on the same theme in “Dark”.

Which poems in this collection really nourished me?

 “Science” is one well worth reading closely. There is ambiguity in its title, for the Latin  “scientia” is simply knowledge, and this poem considers the knowledge of the heart – how we read things and react to things. This is not the same as the common usage of “science” to mean the scientific method. Here an apple tree and a garden and a child’s essay are “science” inasmuch as the heart responds to them.

 “Cellular”, another of this collection’s very best, is written in that very dangerous form – a “letter” to a friend. In this case Bornholdt is responding to the art-works of Liz Thomson. Hence, for the uninitiated reader, the references are a little opaque. Despite this, though, “Cellular” becomes a good meditation on the power of art even if (like me) you don’t know Thomson’s work. There is an image of the visceral appeal of art in the lines  “A bee / landed on a held stem and its vibration / travelled through me like a current, / which is close to how I feel when I see / your work.” There is also an aesthetic close to Baudelaire’s “Correspondances” in the suggestion that one image or sensual stimulant can trigger another: “Remarkable… the way art works. Or poetry. / Like the way a stretch of sand can summon / a dress my mother wore on a date / with my father…”

Generally, I am not an admirer of “found” poems, but much to my surprise, I also found this book’s two “found” poems to be among the very best. The “found” poem “Hearken” is a reorganised set of statements from a 19th century New Zealand book of religious instruction. It becomes a forthright statement on endurance. Even better, “Cultural Studies” begins as instructions drawn from a children’s book of stickers, relating to historical costumes, but moves off on its own direction as the poet jumbles up quotations from the “found” text as wry and subversive comment. This is a very fruitful flight of fancy and Lost and Somewhere Else is a very fruitful collection. Jenny Bornholdt’s words are tender, observant, sympathetic and penetrating.



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Here is the first thing that attracts me to Deadpan, James Norcliffe’s 10th collection of poems – the photo of Buster Keaton on the cover. I love all three of the great clowns of silent cinema, Charlie Chaplin’s little tramp; Harold Lloyd’s middle-class eager-beaver; and Buster Keaton’s adventurer in wild places. But of the three, Keaton is the greatest. In his silent movies, Chaplin plays too much on pathos (and in his talkies he goes all preachy). Lloyd sometimes forgets to be the genial optimist and becomes the nasty practical joker. But Keaton remains the clown staring blankly at the bewildering world and then ingeniously coping with it. Chaplin was pitted against society. Lloyd was pitted against other people’s expectations of him. But Keaton was pitted against life itself and the physical forces of nature. And he was the greatest tumbler of the lot.

James Norcliffe begins with a three-page preface in which he explains his own attitude to poetry. He says that as a youngster “I did not like shouty-poetry, poor-me poetry, poetry that told me stuff and did not want me to argue.” His poetry developed as something cooler and more ironical, which he now defines as “deadpan” – as expressionless as Buster Keaton’s face. (Keaton is referenced in the collection’s title poem.) This aesthetic means being witty, but being serious at the same time. Letting tragedies speak for themselves rather than being the occasion for emotional rant.

So to the poems themselves.

Norcliffe divides them into five sections and in this case (unlike many other collections of poetry I’ve read) the divisions actually mean something thematically.

Part One, “Poor Yorick” is a cycle of genuinely deadpan poems where the (deceased) clown from Hamlet tells us, in blank, ironical tones, how he sees the world, and life, and the inevitability of death. And, reversing Shakespeare’s gravedigger scene, Yorick gets to give us his thoughts on Hamlet’s skull. The whole conceit is at least a distant cousin to Tom Stoppard’s Rosencrantz and Guildenstern  Are Dead, where the supernumeraries get to redefine the grand tragedy. For Norcliffe’s Yorick, life is a long grind, not matter for eloquent soliloquies.

Part Two, “Scan” does take us in various directions. One poem, “The poets at Makara” is a very cheeky (and funny) piece which comes close to mocking the futility of poetry as a form of protest.  More prevalent in this section, however, are poems about young human life. The first poem in this section presents a child in the womb; the next the anxiety of caring for the small child. “Naughty boys’ island” encodes a whole world of young boys’ wayward and destructive impulses. As for “Mycroft”, it presents the angst of a boy who does not have an older brother to guide him.

Part Three, “Trumpet Vine”, gathers poems which, in the dominant dry, ironical voice, suggest discomfort, fear or despair, including ageing as in the poem “There are times I feel like an egg” where “forced to walk that arthritic dog / I discover there are no shortcuts / through the suburbs of my malaise.” Here there is marital bickering (“Control tower”), the horrible jostle of humanity (“Madness of crowds”) and physical nausea about food and flies (“He had this thing”).

Part Four, “Telegraph Road” does not directly address the issue of ageing, but it is implicit in the emphasis on decay and loss. Referencing the Christchurch earthquake, nothing lasts (“Telegraph Road”). There is loss of identity (“Wallet”), decay of a building (“scrim”), absence of the familiar (“Site content”), an old couple no longer communicating (“She moved through the silence”), and fallen, decaying leaves (“leaves”). And when a plant is described (“Waiting for the mulberry”) it has the metaphor “dried berries, like old men / lost among the romantic fiction / have no idea / what’s going to hit them.” In the midst of this there is, however, the slightly more lyrical sequence “Geographies”, especially in its descriptive closing section.

And so to the closing section, Part Five “Four travellers in a small Ford”, gathering comments based on visits to Europe, some ironical, some tourist jottings – except for the deeply weird closing poem “Reforestation in the living room”.

As you can see, I have once again pulled my notorious bibliographical trick of listing and describing the contents of this book, without analysing in detail the poet’s techniques and ideas. But what do you expect in a notice of this length? At least it beats the airy, non-analytical generalities which pass for poetry criticism in some publications.

To sum up, I’d say that Norcliffe lives up to his promise to be dry, ironical and deadpan – and the impulse grows stronger as we near the dying of the light.



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I had a spasm of terror when I read Anne Kennedy’s Foreword to her latest collection Moth Hour. It tells us that in 1973, Kennedy’s brother Philip (then aged 22) accidentally fell to his death. Kennedy herself, the youngest in a family of seven siblings, was 14 at the time. She says the family had difficulty in finding an appropriate way to mourn. Apparently Philip was nicknamed “Moth”. Apparently, too, he left behind his library of favourite books, which Kennedy devoured. And he left behind a packet of unpublished poems. The first section of Moth Hour (making up most of this collection) is called “Thirty-Three Transformations on a Theme of Philip”. It plays variations on one of Philip’s poems.

Anne Kennedy dedicates Moth Hour to her six siblings.

Now why should all this deal me a spasm of terror?

Because all this information suggested to me something specific to this family, intensely personal, tragic and very meaningful for the poet – which leaves the reviewer in the awkward position of responding to the event rather than to the poems themselves. What if the poems didn’t appeal to me or if I had reasonable cause to write negatively about them? What an insensitive person I would seem – somebody not being moved by a family tragedy of this sort. I would have to proceed with caution and diplomacy.

So I do.

Kennedy prefaces her variations by quoting her brother Philip’s poem in full. It concerns a moth placed in a jar; and in a Zen sort of way, it reflects on our human responses.

The “Thirty-Three Transformations on a Theme of Philip”, being 33 separable poems, sometimes riff on a single word of the original poem, like “pen” or “paper” or “leaves” but especially “jar” which seems to image both confinement and orderliness.

Sometimes [as in poem 4.] there is direct reference to her brother’s death, when “The garden path / leads to the garden / all roads / to the brother’s death.” There are [as in poem 7.] evocations of her brother’s bohemian student ways: “At the top of Patanga Crescent the pared-down villa / trembles with young men thinking, / pens lost in the wide sleeves of their dead uncles. / They are ecstatic and do everything extravagantly / in the last light: read, drink, fuck.” There are also poems that seem to offer advice to the young man who died so long ago. If I had the space, I would quote in full one of the most cutting poems, poem 11., which plays variations on, and repeats, the line “You don’t need to be an alcoholic to be a poet.” There are much lighter moments – the jocular doggerel of poem 16., celebrating a bolshie letter her brother once wrote; and there is a very different, discursive tone to poem 19., a kind of free-form meditation on her brother. The dispirited and rather bitter poem about her brother’s funeral itself (poem 28.) perhaps suggests a sense of deflation.

Yet gradually this long set of variations turns into a critique of the youthful idealism and ideals of her brother’s generation, back in the late 1960s and early 1970s. Am I wrong to read poem 24. as a severe put-down of On the Road-type Beat dreams, where hooning around in cars was mistaken for some sort of meaningful rebellion?

 Poem 30., the longest single poem in these variations, is a free-form rant at “the materialists without materials”, who seems to be generations younger than the poet’s, Generations X, Y, Z etc., who may be tolerant but who are lacking focus or opportunites and who are drugged by the media. “And the extremely sad and unfair thing / is that the taking away is being executed by the generation who invented the counterculture, the former swingers / who believed in community, authenticity and peace, who believed in youth culture for fuck’s sake, / but who came swinging back on a pendulum like a wrecking ball and knocked the next generation / out of the very arena where they perform their egregious and foul acts of capitalism.” In other words, hippiedom in the early 1970s led only to self-obsessed middle-aged materialists. The rant continues in the following poem, 31, where horrible capitalist exploiters shout “Hell, yes” to materialism and affluence, presumably reversing the old anti-Vietnam War chant “Hell no, we won’t go.”

Though the whole sequence ends with a personal affirmation, there is much ambiguity about the poet’s long-deceased brother and his youthful ideas and enthusiasms. Is she suggesting that he too would have become a complacent Baby Boomer? Or that he would have continued seeing the world the way he did, the best part of fifty years ago, at the time of his death? There may be other possibilities – that these last poems do not relate to her brother at all; or that the concept of “youth culture” itself is flawed, as youth do not stay young for long.

After these variations, there is a quite separate poem “The The” [the latter word has an acute accent – being the French for tea]. It reads at first as series of separate aphorisms – but some are connected to youthful rage: “The revolution is hatched at school”, “The young men are angry at darkness” etc. And some have biographical connections which are made clear only in the thirteen-page essay with which Anne Kennedy concludes this volume. The essay explains the  influence of Beethoven’s Diabelli Variations upon her when she was a teenager and how they became the ur-structure for her own variations on her brother’s poem. She also dissects the whole phenomenon of hippiedom turning into sheer materialism, and talks in detail (perhaps too much detail) about what influenced and ailed her brother. I will leave it to others to judge whether she does not over-explain what her poems here mean.

This collection was not what I feared it might be. It is not sentimental or morose, it is sometimes satirical and it certainly suggests a lot of anger.

Something Old


 Not everything worth reading is hot off the press. In this section, we recommend "something old" that is still well worth reading. "Something Old" can mean anything from a venerable and antique classic to a good book first published four or more years ago. 

FRANK SARGESON’S STORIES Edited and Introduced by Janet Wilson (first published 2010)

            A couple of times on this blog, I have made obiter dicta comments on Frank Sargeson (1903-1982) as a person (see the review of Margot Schwass’s book about Greville Texidor All the Juicy Pastures; and the review of Sarah Schieff’s Letters of Frank Sargeson). But I have never written a critique of Sargeson’s work itself, despite having read most of it. One day I might put a review of I Saw in My Dream or Joy of the Worm or Memoirs of a Peon or another of his novels into this “Something Old” spot.  Meanwhile, the only time I’ve written a public comment about Sargeson’s work was a review of his short stories when they came out in a new (and probably definitive) edition in 2010, edited by Janet Wilson. The review appeared in the Sunday Star-Times on 21 November 2010. Being written for a newspaper it was inevitably brief and without much nuance, although those who are not used to the demands for brevity, upon which newspapers insist, will probably be surprised to be told that this is a longer review than most which newspapers carry. Anyway what follows is, unaltered from its appearance in 2010, the review as I wrote it.

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Frank Sargeson's collected short stories were first published in hardback in the 1960s. They were republished by Penguin, with additional stories, in 1982, the year of Sargeson's death. Now they're back in print in a third edition, which adds 13 hitherto uncollected pieces.
When I was sent this book to review, my first impulse was to do it the easy way. Like anyone who has taken a few courses in NZ Lit, I had read all Sargeson's published stories a number of times. So I was going to take the stories as read, give a quick squizz to Janet Wilson's scholarly introduction, check out the new stuff and pass a judgement. But I decided to do it the harder way, and I conscientiously re-read the lot.
The earlier, shorter, more cryptic stories, from the 1930s and 1940s, are still the ones on which Sargeson's reputation rests. Once again, I find myself admiring their style without particularly liking the stories themselves. Style isn't everything, after all. Sure, Sargeson says a lot in few words, but the tone is often sour and superior. Those simple Depression-era jokers and sheilas are ironically cut down to size. I know not to confuse Sargeson with his various first-person narrators (and if I don't know it, every academic commentator is there to tell me). But I still weary of the sardonic, laconic Kiwi tone. It's a drawn-out sneer, like meeting a string of Tui ads all saying "Yeah, right".
Much depends on Sargeson, the middle-class writer, knowing and perceiving more than the various working-class or hobo characters he invents to tell his tales. This technique is pushed as far as it can go in the longest story (really a novella), That Summer, where, by story's end, we really have to believe that the invented narrator has been extraordinarily thick, and has not seen what's under his nose. Such a relief to meet a story where the irony is more self-referential and, as a result, more self-critical, such as the masterly Gods Live in Woods. Of course the obliqueness, the less-is-more technique, had its uses as a means of evasion. Biographical data, now well in the public domain, can let us judge how much all the mateship stuff in the earlier stories is coded gayness.
Was Sargeson essentially misogynist? Frankly, I think not as there are positive women characters in some of his stories – including the wrenchingly sad one in An Affair of the Heart. But women-as-controlling-bitches is one recurrent motif. And with this goes what more cliché-prone critics call a critique of New Zealand "puritanism". Sargeson, the little boy who wants to keep playing with his mates, squirms as his mummy makes him tidy up and put on a clean shirt.
The later, and less often anthologised, short stories from the 1950s on, have a remarkably different tone. Sargeson drops the working-class narrators and becomes more middle-class and suburban. The characters are often seedy people keeping up appearances. The author reaches back to an older narrative style, based on character quirks and eccentricities, sometimes with neat and well-made endings. Oddly, these stories seem old-fashioned even by 1950s' standards.
So much for my overview of Sargeson's stories. This might cause a few gnashed teeth among those who want to tell me that Sargeson is the founder of real New Zealand literature. My answer would have to be: "Maybe so, but you can't help noting how dated and limiting much of his approach now is."
And what of this new edition? I'd have to say it's definitive, unless something really unexpected turns up in Sargeson's unpublished papers. Janet Wilson's introduction gives an intelligent run through both Sargeson's story-writing career, and the changes in critical fashion that have greeted him. The 13 previously uncollected pieces divide mainly between those published in Tomorrow in the 1930s and those published in the Listener in the 1960s and 1970s. Most of the former are instantly recognisable as Sargeson's. Most of the latter are fairly anonymous. One or two are makeweights (you can see why they were never reprinted). But there is a treat for scholars in the story Three Women, which can now be compared to its reworked version, Three Men, which appears in the main collection. Some nice additions in the reminiscences of friends and editor at the end.
Admire him or quiz him, this is a handsome edition of Sargeson's shorter stuff and a must-buy for those collecting the essential things in our literary history.
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So that is my review of Sargeson’s shorter fiction as I saw it nine years ago. Had I the space, I would have elaborated on the implicit tone of condescension in so much of Sargeson, and I am sorry that back in 2010, I had not yet encountered Patrick Evans’ curt and accurate summary of so many Sargeson-inspired stories: “Someone not very bright is going to tell us about somewhere not very nice.” Sargeson’s stories might have been a necessary corrective to the rosy, sentimental views of too many New Zealand short stories before he entered the scene. But most of them lack any real sense of empathy with others.  They are stylistic exercises from a dead heart.

Something Thoughtful

Nicholas Reid reflects in essay form on general matters and ideas related to literature, history, popular culture and the arts, or just life in general. You are free to agree or disagree with him.

DISAPPOINTMENT IS INEVITABLE


Recently I said farewell at Auckland International Airport to somebody who was leaving on a long journey overseas. It was a touching moment for those of us who were saying goodbye. But – as you will know from your own airport experiences – there are always those awkward moments where the farewell party stand around idly while waiting for the traveller to turn up, and then waiting for the traveller to check in luggage.
And it was in such an awkward, idle moment that my eyes strayed up, as they often do when I visit this airport, to a quotation from Tennyson’s “Locksley Hall” emblazoned on one wall. It reads thus:
For I dipt into the future, far as human eye could see,
Saw the Vision of the world, and all the wonder that would be;

Saw the heavens fill with commerce, argosies of magic sails,
Pilots of the purple twilight dropping down with costly bales.

The quotation’s relevance to an airport is obvious. Even if Tennyson probably conceived of them as some sort of balloon or airship, here’s a vision of flying vehicles carrying precious cargoes across the skies, which is what many aircraft now do. Of course you can’t blame Tennyson for not seeing that most aircraft would one day be devoted to shuttling tourists around the world, and that this in itself would become their major form of commerce. Despite this, the quotation can still sit there validly as an accurate prophecy of (part of) the future.
Here’s the problem, however. Doesn’t Tennyson’s vision, as now quoted, seem far more romantic and idealistic than the reality of commercial aircraft? Look at the words Tennyson uses. “Heavens” rather than “skies”. “Wonder”. “Argosies”, which at once conjures up images of stately galleons or the like. “Magic sails” suggesting something almost inconceivable. “Pilots of the purple twilight”, at once sounding like heroic adventurers. “Dropping down” rather than “landing”. “Costly bales” rather than “expensive cargoes”.  Put it all together, and it says that one day people will gasp in wonder and amazement at these magnificent flying machines, and see them as heroic.
And of course, we don’t. Once something is an everyday reality, it no longer amazes us. We take it for granted. This is what I have dubbed the “law of mundanity”. Aeroplanes landing and taking off, be they carrying costly cargoes or not? We don’t gasp in amazement and we don’t see their pilots as daring adventurers. The likes of Jean Batten (honoured elsewhere in the airport for her flight from England to New Zealand) might have been seen as daring adventurers eighty or ninety years ago. Aviation then really was a perilous adventure. But if we thought now that simply by flying we were going on a potentially dangerous adventure, then we wouldn’t book our flight. ‘Planes may and do sometimes crash, but their general reliability and ordinariness is why we fly on them at all. Do crowds gather in wonderment as they take off and land? Crowds are more likely to complain about the noise.
Of course there are those who say we should feel a sense of wonder. These are those boosters of science and applied science who often appear in TV documentaries, telling us how wonderful technology is, how ingenious inventors were and are, how amazing are the discoveries human beings have made. They have a point. Perhaps we should spend more time thinking about the collective genius that has created our world. But human nature always works against this sense of wonder. When we are used to something we are used to it, and we do not gasp in wonderment. It’s just part of our everyday life. We do not see the wings of aircraft as “magic sails” any more than we gather around to gasp in wonderment at the washing machine or microwave.
This reality always makes me a profound sceptic whenever I hear predictions of marvels that might one day exist. Scepticism about our future is a growing mood in current society. Even so, we still sometimes have utopias dangled before us, offering the conquest of all diseases, the solution of all social problems and the complete resolution of environmental issues. By all means let us work towards these things. But let us also remember that, when and if they come to pass, human beings will still yawn, scratch and regard the new world as mundane reality. They will not live in a permanent state of inspired wonderment. Where utopias are concerned, disappointment is inevitable.

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Additional comments for pedants: The above is really the totality of my sermon for the day,  but there are probably a few people who want to point out an obvious thing about Tennyson’s “Locksley Hall”.  In its totality, it isn’t consistently optimistic about the future – and as he aged, Tennyson lost much of such optimism as he did have. Indeed, many years later Tennyson wrote a much more pessimistic sequel called “Locksley Hall Sixty Years After”, which damned industrialisation and the modern world. In itself, “Locksley Hall” is a moody young man’s poem (Tennyson was 26 when he wrote it in 1835, but it was not published until 1842). It begins as a self-pitying monologue – the speaker laments that a woman whom he loved has married somebody else and, of course, as most embittered lovers do, he tells us what a bad lot her husband is. But this leads him on to a variety of speculations on the future. A fuller version of the section quoted at Auckland International Airport reads thus:
For I dipt into the future, far as human eye could see,
Saw the Vision of the world, and all the wonder that would be;

Saw the heavens fill with commerce, argosies of magic sails,
Pilots of the purple twilight dropping down with costly bales;

Heard the heavens fill with shouting, and there rain'd a ghastly dew
From the nations' airy navies grappling in the central blue;

Far along the world-wide whisper of the south-wind rushing warm,
With the standards of the peoples plunging thro' the thunder-storm;

Till the war-drum throbb'd no longer, and the battle-flags were furl'd
In the Parliament of man, the Federation of the world.

Note that the underlined lines predict a future in which aircraft will also be used for war, before Tennyson returns to the more optimistic view of a “world parliament”  (the UN or its like). One could say that the partial quotation presented at the airport misrepresents Tennyson’s vision of what future aviation would be.